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ArShi SS:Love...happens!last part pg 76-05/08 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: 8888

good that u updated today otherwise i was thinking abt spammng ur thread from today😆

loved the update
hmmm... so nani doesnt like khushi n likes lavanya.have nani and manorama mami swapped souls😆
and nani is hell bent on marrying arnav to lavanya-the gold-digger
arnav chose to hear khushi's chatter instead of lavanya's bakwas abt nails,skin etc😆
why was khushi crying??😕glad he hugged her back😃
ab jaldi update karna
yes i m phangirl of ur ff

looks like they have swapped souls🤣
hayye meri teesri phangirl☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Butterfly003

Err, who the hell told you this update was boring? 🤔
This was PERFECT! ❤️

okay okay... lemme start from the scratch yeah?😆

So, 1st chapter... Loooved it!😳
Arnav telling his name and all was funny😆 and Khushi! Khushi toh Khushi hi hai😆

2nd- Haiye! What a meeting?! She drooled but denied... hilarious 😆
And the story of him taking her seat... perfect 😆 Loooved it as well😳

3rd- Okay! this was damn good! 😆
Khushi as ASR's wife ... that girl is totally mad and can readily come up with stories 🤣
I loved Anjali's entry😳... Loooved this one too!😳

4th-The team Anjali-Khushi V/S Arnav... Awesome😆😳
Nani is cold here i guess 🤔
LOL! Arnav keeps on complaining about La 😆
nice :P
And that hug!!!
I loved this new Arnav ❤️
Loooved this update! 😳

And i love your story😳

Keshu... u write so good huh😳

finally commented☺️😉😆



hayye i loved this emoticons se bhara comment😆
tujhey to Arnav hamesha se hi pasand tha
hehe im glad u loved it☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: chilli5

wah wat an update

loved it😳
kushi was crying...why?
aww...arnav huged her☺️
u r an amazing writer dear😃
plz plz update soon😛
thanx 4 da pm🤗
n dont say dat it was a boring update😡 awesome wala update☺️
i think nani will see them in dat position n arnav will say that i love her dammit n khushi will b like hawww😲wat🤣
ok update fast😆😆

@bold-tu bahut sapne dekhti hain🤣
Edited by kenny_Arhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: anusha.nush

okay read it a while ago but could not comment
i love your story...it was nice infact very nice start.
waiting too know about it
update soon.

Thanks Anusha!
im glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: *Sanz*

This Is Way Too Good ; D I'm Getting Addicted . Nani Is SO Strict :( Does Khushi Miss Her Parents? 😳

u guessed it right😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: -Sparsh-

OMG
Last part was so sweet
It ws simply amazing
It cud b betta agar phrench mai hota to 🤣
Cont soon 😈

agar phrench mein likhti to sirf tujhey samaj main ata🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Eccentrica

And here you go again...

Vinegarish?😆
Hugging and touching the feet sequence?🤣
Unique museum piece?😆

On a serious note...Nani ko Khushi kyun pasand nahi?😕

On a romantic note...Arshi hug😳...Arshi hug...Arshi hug!☺️

boring scene ko bhi funny bana dala tuney🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: .Anisha.

how could nani get him married to Lavanya when he doesnt even like her ??

I ddnt like nani atall... her cold behavior towards Khushi 😡 
ASR hugged Khushi back 😳 but why was she crying ???
loved it to the core Keshu 😊
waiting for the nxt part
thanks for the PM

nani koi like karne ki zarurat nahi...important ye hain ki tu ASR ko like kare☺️🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 4(b)


Khushi: No'no'nobody said anything, it's just that I was'.

Khushi moved back and wiped the remaining tears!

Arnav: You were??

Khushi: Uhhh'I was missing my parents!

Arnav: Call them then.

Khushi smiled and answered: I want to but I can't'.the ones I want to talk with would not want to even hear my voice'.and I can't even talk to the ones who are ready to talk with me coz (khushi pointed to the sky)they are too far'among the stars!

Arnav was not comfortable with this topic so he attempted to change it!

Arnav: Ok'.you didn't say why you are in Delhi.

Khushi (hesitatingly): Uhh..i came to meet my boyfriend..Rohan!

Arnav: Okayyy!!

He said with a smirk. Who is that idiot who would have Motor Mouth as girlfriend...Nevertheless, he is lucky'.atleast he is not stuck with someone as Lavanya. He was in lost in his thoughts when Khushi poked him.

Arnav(in an irritated tone): What?

Khushi: No'nothing!

Arnav: Then why did you poke me?

Khushi (teasingly): Who'I thought while we were talking about Rohan, you were reminded of your girlfriend!

Arnav: Oh'not again! And she is not my girlfriend, got that?

Khushi: Oh'.your future wife then!

Arnav: Shut up Khushi!

Khushi: What shut up? You shut up'.hayye look at you, you are blushing hearing about your personal Fevicol!

Arnav: What the f'I ain't blushing'and what the hell is fevicol?

Khushi: Not what, who'.Fevicol aka Lavanya'didn't you say she is stuck with you?

Arnav: So?

Khushi: So'she is stuck with you with fevicol, Sallu stuck Kareena's photo to his heart'but Lavanya is one step ahead, so she stuck you to herself.

Khushi laughed at her own silly joke, which was so-not-funny according to Arnav. That's when they heard Anjali's voice;

Anjali: What are you both still doing here; didn't I ask you to come down for dinner?

Arnav: We were just coming Di.

They were just about to move out when something or rather someone flew past Anjali and hugged Arnav fiercely nearly making the latter fall behind.

And here comes my nightmare!

Arnav: Lavanya, what are you doing 'leave me! I'm suffocating here'

Lavanya moved back cupped his cheeks and exclaimed: Oh sorry, sorry'

Arnav muttered 'it's okay' while removing her hands from his cheeks. To khushi, she seemed to be a beautiful and modern woman. She was dressed in a short black off shoulder dress. Her dusky skin covered by makeup, lips thin and highly painted in red, contrasted to her pallid face.

Lavanya hugged Arnav by the side not leaving a single occasion to touch him, much to Arnav's displeasure. He didn't look at all comfortable with her around and tried to pry off her hands away from him.

Lavanya: Five days! Five days since I saw you'And you didn't even answered my phone'

Arnav: I went there for work Lavanya'.I had no useless time to attend to your stupid phone calls!

Lavanya: It's okay ASR'.I understand and I missed you so much!

And I was glad to be away from you! Arnav added in his mind.

Lavanya: When we get married nah, I won't let you go alone on business trips'we will go together as a mini honeymoon'.she finished with a wink!

Marriage and that too with you? You ought to be joking girl'i'm still looking for ways to get rid of you! Motor Mouth is right! You are fevicole-d to me!!!

Arnav's chain of thought was broken by Lavanya's curious query;

Lavanya: Who is she? She asked pointing at Khushi.

Khushi: I am Khushi'

Arnav (cuts in): She is my friend.

He watched Lavanya's reaction closely as the latter turned green and her eyes moved restlessly on Khushi's form.

'Jingle bells, Batman smells'

That's when Lavanya's weird reminder tone made her appearance in turn irritating the hell out of Arnav! How much he hated that stupid cartoon like tone.

Lavanya: Oops, that was a reminder that now I have to apply my body lotion, so I will be back after that!

Anjali: But lavanya'

Lavanya: Di'I will be back in 5 minutes'.Ciao ASR!

She left him with a kiss on his cheeks. And as usual, Arnav wiped his cheeks with his shirt making Anjali giggle.

Khushi (trying hard to hide her smile): So, she is your future wife

Arnav: No need to hide your smile'.go on laugh at me!

Both Anjali and Khushi broke into peals of laughter. Arnav soon realized that these 2 ladies laugh was contagious as he soon started to chuckle'

Khushi: Hey Devi Maiyya, she is so funny'

Arnav: She is not funny, she is damn annoying and her reminder tone is worst!

Khushi: She even puts reminder tone for her body lotion time!

Anjali: That's Lavanya for you, khushi, now tell me, do you think she and Chottey would be able to be cope together?

Khushi: I have no idea about that'but if she changes a bit and he changes somehow then its'

Arnav: Are you always this optimistic?

Khushi: Most of the times I am.

Arnav: That's nice, but I don't think I would ever like to waste my one minute, let alone my life, on her!

Anjali: We need to talk to Nani, chottey, before she decides that you and Lavanya are to get engaged!

Arnav: We will Di, and yet if she doesn't understand, then I will have to go against her for the first time in my life!

Anjali: Let's go down for dinner now. The two of you must be starving!

****

Arnav, Khushi, Anjali took their place and Lavanya joined them soon. Dinner was served by the servants and overall it was a silent affair, with everybody concentrating on their food! That was until Devyani Raizada decided to throw the bomb!

Nani: Chottey, I have decided that your and Lavanya's engagement will be held from 2 weeks prior to today. If you have a meeting, cancel it!

This made Arnav choke on his food. Khushi who was occupying the seat beside him went to his rescue and patted his back whilst making him drink some water. While Anjali couldn't help imagining these 2 together, Nani was furious on seeing this exchange between Arnav and Khushi.

Arnav: Nani, before that we need to talk.

Nani: Talk about what?

Arnav: Nani, I don't think I'm prepared for this engagement now, so'

Nani: I don't want to hear anything regarding this'Lavanya you can start with your shopping, afterall you are Chottey's would be wife.


Link of lavanya's reminder tone below, do check it🤣🤣

Its not getting uploaded here so here's the link-->https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QITfi2rq4aw


Note- i love u peeps like this part😳

I have not proof read this so forgive me for mistakes!

Do leave ur feedbacks and likes, it encourages me to write more☺️

Ive written an OS, if u have time check it out!Heres the link- 80994031  

~~Keshu😳

Edited by kenny_Arhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ha ha Lavanya puts reminder tone for her body lotion time also 🤣perfect choice naniji 🤣 what a reminder tone 🤣 
you cracked me up Keshu... loved reading your update 😳
you are just brilliant and so is your writing...
waiting for the nxt part
thanks for the PM
Edited by .Anisha. - 11 years ago