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Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 2: Ch 21 (Pg 134) (Page 80)

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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Just started reading and managed to finish it in one sitting...Wow!!!! I can actually picture GC and KS in these roles!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter...please PM me!!!

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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jikky_84

Great update Clap

Now wearing Prashant's mangalsutra was a stupid mistake Ouch and starting from morning...its 2 mistakes in one day itself LOL..

But its good to see a tiff between them and such a talk from Yash's side regarding the mangalsutra as these will help them to move forward from the relationship of friendship  to more, even if its will take time.



Thank you Jikky.

Stupid mistake - LOLLOL. Lol - that's more leeway than Arti deserves for this one LOL. But yes, it will help jerk them closer. Left to themselves, these two would have continued as-is. I needed a trigger - so made Arti the scapegoat Wink.

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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sheen-Coolkiwi

Awesome Update Kat Clap
I can't suitable Words to explain Smile
How much I like this Part Big smile
n U r a Wonderfull Writer Embarrassed
Luv You for This Superb UpdateHug


I love you too Sharmeen Hug. You are so sweet - thank you!

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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sb1410

Wonderful update so yash is falling for aarti, and she is begining to move foward with yash both have feelings for each other but have not accepted as yet


Thank you SB.

"Feelings" is a strong word. Yash is attracted to Arti. For Arti though, Yash is a presence - a person who she is tied to without any overt emotions being involved. A budding friend and most definitely Ansh's father - but at the moment, nothing else.
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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rutu83

facepalm moment for aarti
she didn't realize?!
 
and yash...- that was interestingBig smile
 
and what did the family think about them enjoying holi?? bet gayatri had a huge smile when aarti went to give her ansh the second time with yash following.  i had in my mind this image of aarti handing ansh over like a football LOL
 
oh and the first fight- doesn't yash know that when kids are acting up they're their father's son/daughter and  when they behave sweetly they're their mother's.  universal truth.  all the women in my family told me so...Big smile


LOL!! Facepalm moment indeed Rutu!! LOL LOL. If i were to do a Freud on her, i would say she realized exactly what she was doing, albeit unconsciously.

Ahhh Yash - yes, interesting reaction indeed. The guy is attracted and just when he thought he would explore that attraction a bit he got the worst kind of reality check possible LOL. Bechara - for some reason, he brings out all the "cheese" in me and he ends up in such situations LOL.

LOL!! That was exactly how i visualized it - Arti handing Ansh to Gayatri as if he were a football!! High-five my friend Tongue. The family was pleased - before all hell broke loose. You know - i really should have finished up the next part and posted both together...sigh...

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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Iqra--

Oh! What an update!! Very well written, the turmoil of emotions beautifully portrayed! The beginning with a small argument caused by frustration, then the almost perfect happy loving family, and an end with a misunderstanding where no one is to blame. Loved it! Excellent work! 


Thank you Iqra. This whole MU - the mangalsutra bit is so unlikely to happen in real life - it was a struggle to write it in a way that would seem even remotely plausible. Aside from artistic license, i hope i managed to convey some sense of realism in it...

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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 11:13am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kdsubs

Originally posted by Sheen-Coolkiwi

Awesome Update Kat Clap

I can't suitable Words to explain Smile
How much I like this Part Big smile
n U r a Wonderfull Writer Embarrassed
Luv You for This Superb UpdateHug


I love you too Sharmeen Hug. You are so sweet - thank you!


Hug

Did u like the PicsWink

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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sheen-Coolkiwi


Hug

Did u like the PicsWink



Did i ever?? I was going to reply to one and say this is my fav - then saw the next, and next...Oh my Sharmeen - you outdid yourself this time. Wonderful wonderful pics - thank you so so much.

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