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Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 2: Ch 21 (Pg 134) (Page 20)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by disha_rajdev

again a superb update KatClap
do update soon...waiting for itWink
thnk u for the PM dearHeart


Thank you Disha. And you are always so enthusiastic Smile - it motivates me to write!!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MSN_Vanny

Kat Di, Chapters 11 and 12A were fantastic!!!! Clap Clap

I love Gayatri's characterization!! Thumbs Up Naturally instinctive, yet practical! Clap

Vidhi is a sweetheart. Poor girl wants the best for everyone! Approve

I loved that scene with Aarti and Prashant's parents. Beautifully written and described! Day Dreaming

I'm waiting to see how this Punar Vivah happens! Wink


VANNY!!!! Hug How are things? Better i hope?

Thank you for liking Gayatri and Vidhi. I was reading through the last couple of updates (i do that before i write the next one to remind myself - getting old Wink) and was thinking everyone is too nice. Need some vampish-type people LOL.  But - that is not my style i think... let's see.


You liked the descriptions too!?! Dancing First Kadeen and now you - high-fiving myself.


And as to how the PV happens - i already wrote the twists and turns and am now wondering how to untangle the knot... Confused.

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 2:10am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by disha_rajdev

again a superb update KatClap
do update soon...waiting for itWink
thnk u for the PM dearHeart


Thank you Disha. And you are always so enthusiastic Smile - it motivates me to write!!

LOLUr welcome.
U story drives me to be more enthusiasticWink
Yeah that's the spiritBig smile

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IsYaRoCHeR

Reserved!! Embarrassed

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Haiz... Finally got some time to read the update!! Yay!! Dancing

That was an awesome update!! ClapClap

Aarti is back to Indore and it's time to perform Prashant's barsi... I can understand Aarti feelings there...  Ouch That part was nicely written!! Big smile

Owh my... They are seriously discussing about AarYa remarriage... This is something amazing!! The story is pacing nicely... Loving it Kat!! Heart

Waiting for more... Embarrassed


Thank you Isya. Why is it amazing that the family is discussing ArYa remarriage? ArYa will never think of it on their own - kisiko toh dhakka lagana padega na LOL. So who better than the family?
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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by InduG64

Kat...this is turning out to be so beautiful...the flow of the narration is so smooth. I so enjoy reading the clubbed-up updates now. It leaves me satisfactorily sated, if not fully.

I loved the part where Aarti freezes on seeing her feelings for Ansh come alive on screen, for all to see...and she feels herself publicly exposed. Wonder whether she will go through similar situation with Yash...that if she tries to suppress and hide her feelings, they will find a way out through someone else.
I am so looking forward to how you pen down those pent-up attractions these dunces have for each other but won't accept.

Congrats on the new thread pal...I'd like to use a phrase my daughter uses a lot these days: "You killed it!!"Big smile


Thank you Indu. Your words, encouragement - they are so very important to me you know.

Let's see about Arti and her feelings for Yash - Dilli door ast.

And thank you. Right back at you for Samarpan thread 2 my friend. Children say the darn-est things, don't they? Give your little one a hug from me Hug.
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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RA17

Hey Kat Congtrats for thread 2 although i have read in your comments earlier you want to complete the story in one but ab itna acha likhoge so kya kare

So coming to update chap11 n 12a 2 chapter 2 comments
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chapt 11

hmm vidhi n shopping kuch to hai right
Payal has to sound like aarti as she is none other than Payal Aarti Schindhiya
Boyz will be boyz anshu inni jaldi cho possessive for aarti mumaa sww cho chweet naa

i know yaar as massi too i carried my kiddo n got tired as not very use to so completely understand aarti tiredness

dineer ansh my chootu nawab come to mumma i mean aartiJI
thats amazing yash n aarti awkwardness vanish wen it comes to ansh hmm

you left me speechless  as much  aarti n yash with

"of Arti looking at Ansh with pure love and adoration in her eyes as she laughed at something while holding his hands.  And the baby turning his head while in the sling and looking back at her with the same love and laughter on his face. "
With him in her arms she felt like the phoenix being re-born...

beautiful Kat will now move to ch12a



Thank you Riya. Cho chweet of you to give such a detailed feedback Hug.  Oh and its not my writing skills that led to this new thread. Its all you wonderful readers who leave such lovely comments behind. So thank you again.

Possessive Ansh -  i have found that babies tend to be very possessive of the people they like/love. The "me/my/mine" concept comes really early to them LOL.

And yes, ArYa are natural when it comes to Ansh - he brings out the parenthood in both and makes them work as partners. Which is what Gayatri picked up on...


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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RA17

chap12 a clearluy show case another bautiful aspect in genral as 31st dec is to say bbyeto last year n cheris all good bad memories n 1st Jan to welcome new begining wqhich is beautifully potraiyed inas whole in this updte
I am glad aarti have vidhi with her to make other understand her side which was not reeally vivsible in show really dubey loss is something ireeoverable
 
it is fab baeautiful dear tc
thanks for regulars uypdates n pm


Thank you once again Riya.  I really appreciate your taking the time to respond to each update Hug.

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sheen-Coolkiwi

Awesome Update Kat Big smile
poor Aarti pe taras aya mujhe Cry


Thank you Sharmeen. And can i just say - you picked absolutely FAB pictures this time. THANK YOU!!! I adore each and every one of them.

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