Originally posted by: RA17
Kat, welcome back with my 2longish chapter comment
So, coming to ch20 . deepti is great gal n the dedication
suits her as its ssmes like deepti ishtile which i call when i read her ff
Deepti - ishtyle? Don't know about that - but its dedicated to her coz she gave me the idea,as she often does when she makes suggestions.
So , sab gayab, hero n heroine akele tht too no servants hmm
sounds interesting
Hum-tum ek kamre mein... π not quite, how can i forget Ansh jaanu??
So aarya busy with chote nawab in daly chores n (gharelu) homely
convo
Yash ji you don't forget she is gundi did aka JKR so she can
manage it all be it you or ansh
Totally. Arti is super-woman. She can do everything. Are, show mein toh she jumped over walls too during her complicated pregnancy. Toh yeh kya cheez hai!
Yashji its not all about teh best wah kya msterniji hai yash
ki we love her kyun hai naa
N it between you touched yash childhood thts so sweet which showcase
their comfort
Yes... i have wondered about Yash's childhood so threw that in. I don't plan on visiting his childhood again - but kya pata, some of these things just write themselves in.
Loud crash waht aartiji as always clums but waht she did hmm
i am hoping to have fund aarya ride kat n yes it is
Clumsy Arti as you said it. I think i was inspired by Arti in the show slipping in the water (just before Ayu's birth) - but at the end of the day, it was immaterial how she fell. Only that she did and hurt her ankle. And her head of course - nahi toh apna Yash-babua usko godi mein kab uthata??
Wow yashji put her in her embrace n then her foor balle
balle.. pyar toh hona hi tha.. ( sorry long way to go) but this is just beginning
right kat as life parners not lovers but better status then parents right
Lol!!! Abhi se! Ria i tell you - dheeraj dharo. What will you do if i ever put in an actual romantic scene between these two?? π
N again their convo on daily chores n yash detailing at work
wondering ghar ka kya hoga
Aarya n bathroom hmm coffee naa world famous coffee or i
shud say coppeee
Deal woh mronig se leke sham tak booking done
π Arti is smart. Though Yash said it, she is scot free in the evening when both would be more tired π.
Bath ab samjha aaya nurse kahein chiye this even i am
surprised with this obvious element let me see where you wil take them
I won't take it anywhere - well, not anytime soon. but if you have read chapt 22, you know Yash is...lets say, becoming more aware...
U know kat i love you bring small things be it yash
childhood, aarti accident, yash hurt on aarti word of she dont care or the face
she don't have much clothes also how yash observes n understand her comfort n
discomfort
Glad you like that. Kyunki, the practical side of me won't let me ignore the practical aspects even in fiction. IT can get annoying - but i can't move the story forward till i take care of the practicalities in their lives.
Yash is such sweetheart wow skirts she must look fab n the portray
is just perfect maar hi daala... love the vision Kat
Omg wow wow i just loved it n really forget how many n the
times i have read n re read it n honestly it has hidden wish from my side too
always want yash to care for aarti like se did to him before her pregnancy..
cant wait to jump on ch21
ps i stiill feel my comment is too short on what you gave usπ€
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