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Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 2: Ch 21 (Pg 134) (Page 109)

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Ouch

Ouch! That hurts. I am sure Aprita's part and her past must have been really difficult to write. Hai na?? Writing about a character whos not in the story anymore, is quite difficult to portray but u made it look as real as possible.

I think this Aprita's death mystery is kinda open analysis for us. It could have been overdose unintentionally/ intentionally. Well, I take it as unintentionally. I don't wanna feel negative that it was suicide in her depressed state.

Loved Aarti and Anjali's small didi wala conversation.

Green eyed monster was too good. Good that u r showing more signs of sensor between AarYa and the best was the very 1st where Aarti had her Yash Sensor experience. LOLLOLWinkWink

No offence to the Arpita's part but I kinda loved this scene not because it felt passionately romantic but it actually showed how well Aarti and Yash, basically here Aarti, is moving over her past, her Prashant

Way to go AarYa.


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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
Lovely update! Arpita's tale is tragic but I'm glad that Aarti is slowly helping Yash to overcome the void Arpita left in his life. 

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Posted: 26 May 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sheen-Coolkiwi

Superb Update Kat Clap
Shuru se Aakhir tak Whole part was Simply Amazing Big smile
Arpita committed suicide is came as a Shock for me Shocked
Poor Yashu n his guilt Cry
Aarti was J from Anjali LOL
Keep It Up ClapClap
Continue Soon Wink


Thank you Sharmeen.

The guilt of Arpita's death has been the main emotion-cum-stumbling-block in allowing Yash to move ahead. He blames himself for not being there to prevent her from taking an overdose - whether intentional or not. He knows/believes she would  not have died that night if he had been there.

Lol, yes, jealousy made a small lil appearance here LOL. Glad it helped to cheer you all up Wink.

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Posted: 26 May 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prettyji

love it awesome


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Posted: 26 May 2013 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .KillTheBitch


SUICIDE...ouch!

My heart goes out to Yash and how he felt at the moment! Why are there good writers like you guys to evoke emotions in me? Urrrggghhh!!!!

Aarti's jealousy was veeerrryyy fun to read! Her saali aadhi gharwaali had me cracking up..I could just imagine Aarti saying that!!

The entire past was sort of fun to read along with sorrowful!!!

Great update Kat!

Loved it...do update soon!




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Yes, the guilt is the biggest stumbling-block. But lol to your statement girl - your piece on Tum Hi ho was very evocative Smile. And if what i write leaves you emotionless then i failed - so am glad i could make you feel.

LOL - glad the jealousy bit was funny. And yes - i could so see Kratika as Arti muttering it to herself too LOL .

Thank you so much Carissa.

Btw Carissa - your new avatar is...freaky to say the least.

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Posted: 26 May 2013 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MelodiousDreams

I feel terrible. I'm back here after 100 pages, reading through everything from Chapter 13 onward - and I just realized that the last reserved post I made was right after Chapter 13! *sigh*

*RESERVED - for brief reviews, quotes, and miscellaneous comments about Chapters 14-18*


Chapter 15

- The reason I went back to check my reserved posts in the first place - my excitement over the jasmines in Chapter 15. Aarti's gajra...As soon as Yash sensed the scent of jasmines, I instantly thought of that moment in Delhi. Reading on..."He had always loved this smell of jasmine..." This...The symbolism is beautiful, Kat. Beyond beautiful, truly. The attraction of the fragrance of the jasmine flowers, first of all...Just a whiff, and Yash is captivated, entranced, pulled towards it...Just like last time, with those silken strands of hair... 

- "But you were in Delhi and the roses in that one patch had dried up completely." - And this. The roses, Arpita's favorites, completely dry now, in that patch. The color symbolism struck me just now as I was reading - red and white, roses and jasmines...Arpita and Aarti. And to me, the symbolism also encompasses each woman's (current) marital status. I don't know if I'm reading too much into it, but there you have it. I love this as much as the symbolic meaning of the chai (and the contrast with the coffee), if not more.

This is all I can manage for now - profuse apologies! - but I will be back to edit this space a lot more as time allows! Reached the end of Chapter 15 and I'm thrilled about the turbulence that is sure to come in the upcoming chapters as I continue to catch up!




Borna - you will make me re-read the chapters at this rate LOL.

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Posted: 26 May 2013 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by goldenmoon

awesome update
arpita's suicide Shocked
like is not working


Thank you Dona.

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