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Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 2: Ch 21 (Pg 134) (Page 101)

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SUICIDE...ouch!

My heart goes out to Yash and how he felt at the moment! Why are there good writers like you guys to evoke emotions in me? Urrrggghhh!!!!

Aarti's jealousy was veeerrryyy fun to read! Her saali aadhi gharwaali had me cracking up..I could just imagine Aarti saying that!!

The entire past was sort of fun to read along with sorrowful!!!

Great update Kat!

Loved it...do update soon!


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I feel terrible. I'm back here after 100 pages, reading through everything from Chapter 13 onward - and I just realized that the last reserved post I made was right after Chapter 13! *sigh*

*RESERVED - for brief reviews, quotes, and miscellaneous comments about Chapters 14-18*


Chapter 15

- The reason I went back to check my reserved posts in the first place - my excitement over the jasmines in Chapter 15. Aarti's gajra...As soon as Yash sensed the scent of jasmines, I instantly thought of that moment in Delhi. Reading on..."He had always loved this smell of jasmine..." This...The symbolism is beautiful, Kat. Beyond beautiful, truly. The attraction of the fragrance of the jasmine flowers, first of all...Just a whiff, and Yash is captivated, entranced, pulled towards it...Just like last time, with those silken strands of hair... 

- "But you were in Delhi and the roses in that one patch had dried up completely." - And this. The roses, Arpita's favorites, completely dry now, in that patch. The color symbolism struck me just now as I was reading - red and white, roses and jasmines...Arpita and Aarti. And to me, the symbolism also encompasses each woman's (current) marital status. I don't know if I'm reading too much into it, but there you have it. I love this as much as the symbolic meaning of the chai (and the contrast with the coffee), if not more.

This is all I can manage for now - profuse apologies! - but I will be back to edit this space a lot more as time allows! Reached the end of Chapter 15 and I'm thrilled about the turbulence that is sure to come in the upcoming chapters as I continue to catch up!


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awesome update
arpita's suicide Shocked
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Originally posted by Deepti1808

Great update Kat !

Loved the progress as we finally got to know the Arpita side of the story. You had given vague hints here and there but it was good to have it out in the open. Tragic though it was but her untimely death left a whole family in chaos with Yash facing the worst of it.

On the bright side like how AarYa have started becoming more aware of one another. Loved the bit of jealous-Aarti and more than that I liked the fact that Yash enjoyed her jealousy just as much.

As usual great writing. Waiting for the next update to see how you take this forward.


Ah Deepti Hug - i missed you!! Your comments, feedback, suggestions always give me a - call it push, or perhaps peg? A point, a thought to mull over and voila - i get an epiphany. Any wonder i love you as i do??? Hug

Arpita has been the most difficult character in this story for me. I would have found her impossible to live with too... As for the back-story - it was bound to come but i was planning it for later. With pv ending though <shrugs>

Lol -- you didn't think the jealousy bit came too early? LOL

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