OMG!!!! Didi!! The symbolism here were magnificent!!!! π π
I loved the way you portrayed both sides of the coins of each of AarYa's lives and eventually, the way they came upon a decision! It was amazing! Certainly my favourite part! π
Please continue soon!!! Loads of love! π€
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I have no clue what I wrote above! That sounds so disoriented and detached! π I'm sorry! You totally deserve a better comment! π [I secretly blame it on the on-going conversation I was having with Kadeen at that time! π]
Yash's realisation was so symbolic! Red roses, a symbol of love, withered and died, just like Arpita. Yash had become so attached to the "red roses", yet at the first chance, he was deeply affected by the Jasmines(Aarti). Fantastic!!!! π π However, the irony of it all, as Kadeen pointed out to me earlier (before I actually read that part of the story! π³), was Arpita being allergic to jasmines. Wow! I'm surprised that Yash actually agreed to marry Aarti only after realising where he knows jasmines from! π²
Aarti(*sighs*)...her realisation was,of course, most emotional. π Poor girl is always torn whenever life throws her a curved ball. I loved everything about her realisation! So natural! π³ Especially, her admitting that she would still miss a real family if she chose not to do Punar Vivah! π For me, she had already decided the moment she admitted that. π
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Now that I'm somewhat satisfied with this comment, I'll say the usual, loads of love!!!! Please continue soon!! π π€
Edited by MSN_Vanny - 10 years ago