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Arhi SS: Bring Him back Ch17 - page 125 COMPLETE (Page 62)

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by HK90


and here I am finally catching up the story
first go to page 50 i edited it. 



I nodded my head at him while wiping his face with a wet wipe. I cared his head till he fell asleep while I cradled him. I shut my eyes pushing back the tears. As he slowly fell asleep in my arms. Like he had the first time I saw him, like he had every day for the last few weeks. He snuggled as closers he could to hiding himself in me. Listening to my heartbeat as his lullaby

you made emotional once again , whay you do this with me  you know i love to so it! 

take out that sheetal, she is on my nerves   not so soon i got something planned for herWink 

I gently picked him and cradled him. He stopped crying he looked up into my eyes. His eyes were Arnav's that was clear. His small hands were reaching for my face. I felt them patting on my cheeks gently. I felt as if he wiped away my tears. His small touch is all it took to make me feel so different. He rested his head on my chest. Listening to my heart beat like he knew it. As if he recognized it. 

Just one words mind blowing 
and you bad  Cry that i Am!! 
and thank you!!!!

The flashback was simply superb made me cry like a mad person, why you do so much emotional attiachar, i descrised it and you incrised it kya  yeah after all bas kuch level peh to lanah hai nah LOLloool you are so right!!! i did increse it thanks to you! ROFL

I loved the way they stopped her, wow Ashvath is too good, did i say that i love the baby too too much well i'm saying it now i love him to the core, he is mine your???? 
since when?? Confused Confused Confused Confused 

The last part was superb loved the litte argument between them, and Ashvat statign that he will never win over Khushi. 
Simply mind mind blowing 

THANK YOU!!!!!

FOR THIS UPDATE THE MORE I WILL WRITE AND THE MORE IT WILL BE NOT ENOUGH SO I'M JUST SAYING IT WAS SIMPLY HEART TOUCHING, MIND BLOWING AND LOVED IT TO THE CORE Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart  Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart  Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 





i cant say thank you enough LOL

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by HK90

Humi once i said that the person who was saying to Ashvath that is mom is Khushi was Akshey but why now i think it is the woman too?? Confused Confused 
I think she tounth him saying that she is not his real mom and that his mother is Khushi, am i right? or i'm just becoming crazy?? LOL nooo theres another mystery behind it but that is crazy could of been true 

Anyway i think the person who will enter in the scene it's the nurse from the past, do tell me if i'm right okay, and don't dare to change the person if i guessed it , warna you don't know of what i'm capable  your always right D'oh

Now me off to bed 
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ongongong

That was just FANTABULOUS!!! Loved it... thank you!!! 

The flashbacks were beautifully described... and i just loved all the of it...

I am sure...khushi's his mom...

Will be eagerly waiting!!!!!

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thank you!! 
i think everyone thinks that 

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MeenuArshiCrazy

cute story... loved it... Arnav n Aswath are just awesome... totally confused with the Flashback... pls Pm me wen u update

thank you!! 
have added you to the pm list Wink you know that 
will help you in next chapter with the confusion 
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shree.Nanda

update!!!

how could i say no to you 
tomorrow or Monday Wink
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Waiting for the next part

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 11:39am | IP Logged
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Give me the update Monkey WinksMonkey WinksMonkey Winks

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
HUMI JI where is the UPDATEWA?Confused

Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 10 August 2013 at 12:41pm

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