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Arhi SS: Bring Him back Ch17 - page 125 COMPLETE (Page 51)

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shree.Nanda

done with chapter 6
 
loed the transitions in khushi throughout the update
 
 u know i have a lil cousin, n i named him ash, ashvath is cute n always reminds me of himBig smile
 
brb after reading next chappyWink

your jumping stories LOL

i would lose track if i was doing that Wink but cant be as smart as you! 
keep reading more transitions to come! 
and why didnt you suggest asu as a name fo me if you names him that Angry
all i got was names of actors you love LOL Wink 

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
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keep asking your not getting one Tongue

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 6:52pm | IP Logged

and here I am finally catching up the story
first go to page 50 i edited it. 



I nodded my head at him while wiping his face with a wet wipe. I cared his head till he fell asleep while I cradled him. I shut my eyes pushing back the tears. As he slowly fell asleep in my arms. Like he had the first time I saw him, like he had every day for the last few weeks. He snuggled as closers he could to hiding himself in me. Listening to my heartbeat as his lullaby

you made emotional once again , whay you do this with me

take out that sheetal, she is on my nerves   

I gently picked him and cradled him. He stopped crying he looked up into my eyes. His eyes were Arnav's that was clear. His small hands were reaching for my face. I felt them patting on my cheeks gently. I felt as if he wiped away my tears. His small touch is all it took to make me feel so different. He rested his head on my chest. Listening to my heart beat like he knew it. As if he recognized it. 

Just one words mind blowing 
and you bad  Cry

The flashback was simply superb made me cry like a mad person, why you do so much emotional attiachar, i descrised it and you incrised it kya  yeah after all bas kuch level peh to lanah hai nah LOL

I loved the way they stopped her, wow Ashvath is too good, did i say that i love the baby too too much well i'm saying it now i love him to the core, he is mine 

The last part was superb loved the litte argument between them, and Ashvat statign that he will never will over Khushi. 
Simply mind mind blowing 

FOR THIS UPDATE THE MORE I WILL WRITE AND THE MORE IT WILL BE NOT ENOUGH SO I'M JUST SAYING IT WAS SIMPLY HEART TOUCHING, MIND BLOWING AND LOVED IT TO THE CORE Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart  Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart  Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 









Edited by HK90 - 20 July 2013 at 6:52pm

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
Humi once i said that the person who was saying to Ashvath that is mom is Khushi was Akshey but why now i think it is the woman too?? Confused Confused 
I think she tounth him saying that she is not his real mom and that his mother is Khushi, am i right? or i'm just becoming crazy?? LOL 

Anyway i think the person who will enter in the scene it's the nurse from the past, do tell me if i'm right okay, and don't dare to change the person if i guessed it , warna you don't know of what i'm capable 

Now me off to bed 

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
story is interesting ...pls add me n PM list pls

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Posted: 30 July 2013 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
That was just FANTABULOUS!!! Loved it...

The flashbacks were beautifully described... and i just loved all the of it...

I am sure...khushi's his mom...

Will be eagerly waiting!!!!!

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Posted: 06 August 2013 at 9:25am | IP Logged
cute story... loved it... Arnav n Aswath are just awesome... totally confused with the Flashback... pls Pm me wen u update

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