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Arhi SS: Bring Him back Ch17 - page 125 COMPLETE (Page 126)

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 5:02pm | IP Logged



Beautiful ending...

Raizada's got want they deserved...

loved it Smile

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 5:19pm | IP Logged

Okay I know I have still to comment on the previous chapters but these doesn't mean I don't have read them, because I had, I just need to give my comment.

Raizada's are out, I'm happy that Arnav didn't went mad, I liked it, and frankly speaking I know you would naver make him lost his mind, after all we are sisters, agar mein tume nahi samjugi toh or kisse samjugi.

I loved the chapter, the best part was obviously Ashvath that baby is like my world, I fall in love with him I think and in the way he speaks, simple too lovely Hug Heart

Arnav asking for a sister for Ashvath was simply too good and lovely Hug

The scene that touched my heart was Ashvath in the kitchen helping Khushi cooking, I can imagine him sitting with a pan on his head, gosh how adorable he would be looking Day Dreaming 

My heat went for this storyHeart, You know while I was scrolling down I was saying "please make it long" but when I saw your words in red I actually screamed a "NO!!!" and then after finishing it I started chanting "how can she end it here, no ways I'm not letting her end it here".

So now after talking with my self LOL

I WANT YOU TO GIVE ME AN EPILOGUE *with a straight face"

I hope you got me, I'm not joking, I'm serious Geek

This was the last chapter, which mean we have chance to get an epilogue and you have the chance to write one Wink

Do it for me, pretty please  *making a puppy dog face*

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 5:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by babyhumz

Originally posted by Preet.Kc


I read it and i loved it too too much 
of course i want another chapter 
What tipe of end is this Confused
i want to see Ashu at the end Embarrassed

where did you pop out from loool 
lol yes ma'am 

I come when you don't expect me to come Wink
now give me and epilogue and i will be happy 
i'm not leaving you like this, i will start to spam this thread, I mean it. 
I WANT and I WANT an epilogue, if possible with another baby Embarrassed

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
That was a lovely ending <3
Loved it <3

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Lovely ending

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
Nice...bookmarked it

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
Nice ending dear.

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Superb !!!

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