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Posted: 10 years ago
RES

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i wring this to say i'm the first to read and as emotions are too much 
i just want to say that i loved it too too much dammit 
okay the baby is Khushi's right πŸ˜‰
not done yest full comment tomorrow going to write mine πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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"Mami, mami is mama okay now?" He  asked with tears rolling down his face. What a cute scene, I simply Love Askhay, in the CS you said he love his Mama and Mami a lot and also . . .. i'm addind his cousin brother? Am I right? 

"He will be fine" I whispered to him while holding him in my embrace. Of course he will be fine, now that you come, and id he will taken away from these vultures, he will be even better. 

"You said he will be back once she's here. Why did I ever believe you?" Arjun said in anger looking directly at Vivan. Omg this Family is really too much it's getting on my narves πŸ˜‘  πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ agar Vivan ne kaha hai he will be okay than it mean he will πŸ˜‘  πŸ˜‘

"Your Bhai is with you Khushi." He said in a low voice. Words I had heard him say many times before. Word that were from his heart. He was always more than a brother to me. Since I meet him and Anjali they had been my family with my Husband My world. I shut my eyes for a second not letting anyone see my emotions. This scene was simply to touching, I love that Anjali and Vivan love really too much Khushi and that they have full faith in her,  I love that Vivan consider her as his sister, really a cute gessture. 


The flashback was really touching, they were really tauching to their nani πŸ˜­


I love the Scene where Aakash come to take Khushi's signature and make understand to them that only she is the MD and only she can sign it. 


Omg Khushi was in london that means the scene in the prologue was in London roght? 


The scene with the baby was too much lovely and cute, i adore that part 


"I think she needs to be taught a lesson" Antika stared at the door. πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ how dare she, i'm damn sure they did something, they created this mass, i'm super sure about it πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ but i think now it's their turn to learn a lesson 

Edited by HK90 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
REWA

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i'm sorry Guruji but when i'm not sleepy no one can beat me  
i got the entire first page 

try next time maybe luck will help you 
yeah if i'm sleeping for sure 
Edited by HK90 - 10 years ago
Preet.Kc thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
this post is for the names will give you a lot of suggestion 

okay here the suggestions 

Anmol = priseless 

Pratik = simbol (and i will add of love) πŸ˜‰

Manav =Man πŸ€£ 
Naman= Lalutation
Nayan= eye
Neel=Cloud; champion; passionate
Nihal=Gratified
Nikhil=entire
Sameer=breeze
Shaan=pride
Shiv
Syum =ray (maybe of hope)
Varun
Vinay= modesty
Amar
Raj 
Ranveer shot veer
Rishi 
Rohan 
Arjun
Aryan= but too common
Arman = wish 
Arav = peaceful 

You can also use Prem or Samar πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

I think there are enough πŸ˜†
Edited by HK90 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
mine
technically me 2nd!!!!!!!! yipee!!!!!
 
chelaji, guru's greatest success is chela's success so obviously i succeeded n am happy πŸ˜†
 
ur guruji is witty u knowπŸ˜‰
 
humi darling running to give u bear hug n wet kissy, mwahzzz!!!!!!!!
 
awesome update darling
 
shit-all, manohar, manorama, ankita, arjun---> shut upiya lo kaminon, or i'll kick ur asses for hurting my khushi
 
anji-hubby-kiddo-- mwahzz!!!!!!!! u 3 r the apple of my eyes after arshi family ofcourseπŸ˜‰
 
akash, oye hoye! wat an attitude sirji!πŸ˜‰ love you re, but not more than arnie baby
 
wat da... 1 confusion, was aman's phone call n bomb blast recent or 2 yrs. back?? coz aki said the way she reacted n stuff, but wo to abhi india aayi na
 
n ye story bhi london mein, ipk n london connection is always rocking in humi darling's wrks
 
cutie baby is arshi's baby ryt?😳
 
his name, my suggestions are:
Rahul
Aditya
Arsh
Samar
Shubham
Surya [🀣]
Rohan [my bhai wala rohan se inspired, not office one]
Mohit
Prithvi
Hridey
Satyam
Sidharth
Rishi
Raj
Jai
Rajat
Raghav
Arjun
Yuvraj
Gaurav
Shravan
Aarav
Aayushmaan
Barun😳
Varun
Prateik
Siddharth
Arjun
Shakti
 
Edited by Shree.Nanda - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

I am here.

 
Why all have problem with Khushi????
This is too much. I am feeling like killing them one be one. But first I will start with chachi.
 
Nani is dead.
 

"I thought the business would go on my daughter's name." Monohar whispered under his breath.  Jaise karni waise bharni

 
I am hell confused.
1. Why none except Khushi can go there??
2. What is the baby doing?? And from where he came from??  
3. Why Khushi is not a simple Raizada??
4. Khushi was in London??
 
Apu update soon. My head is spinning.
 
Name suggestions: I don't know.
Edited by arnavkushi70 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
look Humi I was right in reverving 3 post 
1 for comment 
2 for message 
3 fir suggestions 
and yeah this one to let you know πŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜† 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: HK90

look Humi I was right in reverving 3 post 

1 for comment 
2 for message 
3 fir suggestions 
and yeah this one to let you know πŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜† 


so now you have 4 spots πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
U know u write emotional staff very well.. :) who is this little boy!!u r not puzzling it up, r u?? I'm already in love with anjali nd vivaan.. :)
Btw u can name him kian!!!Edited by jeya0301 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: jeya0301

U know u write emotional staff very well.. :) who is this little boy!!u r not puzzling it up, r u?? I'm already in love with anjali nd vivaan.. :)
Btw u can name him kian!!!


Thank you!!! i love emotion its in every par of our life and i like it when readers can feel what the character if going through... 
next chapter you will know who he is, this story has less puzzles but still someπŸ˜‰ 
some characters that are love!!! 
my first name suggestion 
thank you! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav has such a selfish family!!!!😑