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FF: The Future Of The Voice Thread 2 (Page 69)

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Absolutely exciting and entertaining update...

Well done...ClapStar

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IsYaRoCHeR

Originally posted by Sri_Radha

Wow...GreatClap and long update..Tongue.Clap

First part superb...ClapClap
Aarti in drunken stateLOL...and Naughty yash..Wink

Prashant is such a cheap personAngryAngry...His gang members hiding what aarya doing in their roomAngryAngryAngry

Loved the way yash smartly handled drunken aarti.Wink..Aarya moments and their kiss so passionate and romanticBlushingBlushing
omg..Aarti doing collage and sent that pictures to prashantROFL..She is crazy..Liked their fun momentEmbarrassed

Aarya morning scene awesome.Embarrassed..

Paypal -Aarya phono convo superbClap...Happy that paypal told about their talk with ansh and gave phone number to aarya..Smart kidsClapClap
Finally yash smartly speaks with ansh and asked him to follow what he says..Star

Last part was niceStar
So Glad that yash finds and saved ansh Clapand sad that aarti kidnapped by prashantCry
Wow..Ansh accpeted yash as his father...Big smileDancing

Prashant -yash phono convo nice..Yash confessed his feeling towards aarti.Star.Urgh...Jerk prashantAngryAngry
omg..Aarti and prashant is in bhopal..Shocked

Precap is shocking and sad...I think its another dirty plan of prashantAngry...oh no gayatri choosing another girl for yash and will hate ansh.Ouch

continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part...Day Dreaming
and 

Nice teaser for next part...ClapStarClap
Thanks for pmEmbarrassed



Thanks a lot Radha... Hug I'm very overwhelmed with your response ! Truly encouraging ! Big smile

Glad you loved every bit of it.. especially the scenes ! Big smile And yeah, Aarti and her collage ! LOL She's just pretending to be me, Isya! LOL

I know the precap sounds interesting but yet it could be rejected ! Ouch Bare with me, everything will happen in a very short time.. And all is gonna be well except for a twist ! Tongue

Thanks once again for your beautiful response.. Star You're most welcome for anything ! Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
First of all I am so sorry yaar for mylate comment as I am having both back pain and fever...CryCry
Hope you will forgive me dost..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
OMG...OMG...OMG...What was that Ishu...ShockedShockedShocked...was that your update or a romantic action film...ClapClapClapClap.I swear upon God Ishu I am not lying or pampering you.Trust me dear while reading your update I just felt that I was watching a superb and rocking romantic action movie...ClapClapClap.
Each and everything from first to last was just perfect...ClapClap.I have read so much FF but for the first time I have read something like this which is just beyond everything..ClapClap and I really salute u for that.ClapClapStar
What shall I praise dear and how as I am lacking proper words...WinkWink Drunk Arti's pain and naughtiness...Yash's smartness...their attempt to come physically close and that Passionate Arya kiss...HeartHeartHeart...Ma kasam tumne to mujhe maar hi dala...WinkLOL
In the Morning Arti found Shirtless Yash close to her on bed and I dreamed myself there in Arti's position...Heart...ROFL
I loved the part most when Art send those pics to that Kamina Prashant..AngryAngry and what a fantastic dialogue you have written...Ab tumhein yeh request bandh karo aur chup chap Ansh ko vapaz kara do... Varnaa Yash toh readyy hain , unke dole shole ke saat... Tumhein dund kar, tumhari band bajaoge! Uske baat, tumhi socho, tumhare haal kya hoga, haan babyy??...1000 salute for you ISHU.
After that Papayal's scene which was so cute...Embarrassed
Then comes the action scene .I must say little Ansh is really very smart like her Yash papa and my heart goes more for Yash when he jumped into water to save Ansh Smile But that Kamina Prahant spoiled everything...AngryAngryAngryAngry
And after that another condition of Prashat ..AngryAngry which is a killing suspense for me...CryCry
The precap was just shocking Ishu.Plz Ishu dont torture this poor soul so much as I am already dying for the suspense...CryCry
I wanna hug u tightly for that special note in which u mentioned that Kamina Prashant will die ...PartyDancingDancing
Dont you dare to stop your FF soon.I am warning you Ishu if you do this I will be worse Kamini than Prashant for you...AngryAngryAngry



Edited by nusratjahan505 - 14 July 2013 at 2:50pm

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 8:05am | IP Logged
great update and great job on the storyBlushing
really liking it..

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sri_Radha

Commented on pg-63Big smile

Replied ! Big smile

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rachna1970

Oh Isya that was surperb update dearStar
Loved evry single twist here
Drunk Aarti n naughty Yash ,,,,wowEmbarrassed 
Morning with  confussed Aarti n her Aisa  waisa questions ,,,lovelyShocked
Super smart Palak n payal,,,love themHeart
Glad that Yash finds Ansh n he accepted him as his Father,,wowThumbs Up
Last twist is shocking yaar ,,cant wait for it

Pls continue ur story as u decided as ealier
Enjoying evey twist dearSmile

Thank you Rachna ! Big smile

Glad you loved the twist as well as the scene.. Big smile

Thanks for your suggestion.. I will continue as I planned for sure ! Wink

Keep Enjoying ! Wink
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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RA17

part 17

The pain aarti felt that the tears her only way to express wat loss hse had just in a hope of getting wat she always wants her anshCry

But glad she had her companion her yashji who put her in his embrace to absorb her pain n misery n become her pillar of strength n yash his logics were so rightTongue that P will see them b vola he did n  isya credit goes to you for making P the evil bestClap omg aarti finally realized n said thta yes yash is the one for her ( indeirectly) but P is making me scaredEmbarrassedBig smile

 

Isya you can create aarya magical moment in any damn place or situation  and i am so much loving it now you realize y i said to you in previous thread that ou n aarya romane is best combination reEmbarrassed

 

Yash can feel her restlessness n aarti in anxiety not able to say anything to yashOuch

Yash thoughs going so cutely here there in mid of aarti tears n then in her fear of telling anything to yash aarti said the truth to yash about him being hot n sexy waise bhi how can somebody resist yash in his towel re n that too when his long  fingers traced on her waist

 Blushing Blushing Blushing

But as soon as she gone i was so scared but you come up with so funny n amazing thot aarti drunk n p wants her to sleep with yash ( thank god as it hot he will really stoop so low as she hurt his ego telling yash is far better than him ) but this is a punishment or surprise for us IsyaWinkWinkWink

 

Really you are rocking gal love itHeart

Thanks a ton for update n pmHug

Promo looks scary glad i just need to jump to next WinkLOL 


OMG OMG Riya ji ! Thanks a lot.. Hug

@Bold- Every and each of the sentence you wrote means a lot to me.. Many many thanks for the compliments and for making me feeling special ! I'm doing my best in another way ! Embarrassed Hug

You are welcome for everything.. Yup fast moving Riya ! LOL Wink

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sara1990

awesome...
I love it
please do continue

Thank you Sara ! Big smile

Glad you loved it... Embarrassed

Sure, I'm planning to continue ! Wink

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