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If Only You Saw Me (8) (Page 117)

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by Onir

Sweety kahan ho tum ???

Aaj sirf like karke jaa rahi ho... Wink



ohh yaar.!!

woh itne din exams ke chakkar me ghar pe kuch kaam nahi karwaya toh abb meri milke sab nikaal rahe hai.!!Sleepy

so was busy with family.Big smile

Good ... Family also deserves to be with you exclusively... Smile



Big smile

they deserve some of my pranks as well!!LOL
prankster Sweety ... in form Wink

well was never out of the form.!! Wink 
 
Only covered by books!LOL
 
Happy Sunday all! 
 
Me dancing, Papa is coming!!!Party

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Yay! GO give him a big welcome first as soon as he comes. Happy holiday to you Avi. Have a great weekend with PapaHug

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by Onir

Sweety kahan ho tum ???

Aaj sirf like karke jaa rahi ho... Wink



ohh yaar.!!

woh itne din exams ke chakkar me ghar pe kuch kaam nahi karwaya toh abb meri milke sab nikaal rahe hai.!!Sleepy

so was busy with family.Big smile

Good ... Family also deserves to be with you exclusively... Smile



Big smile

they deserve some of my pranks as well!!LOL
prankster Sweety ... in form Wink


well was never out of the form.!!Wink
I agree madam LOL

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by Onir

Sweety kahan ho tum ???

Aaj sirf like karke jaa rahi ho... Wink



ohh yaar.!!

woh itne din exams ke chakkar me ghar pe kuch kaam nahi karwaya toh abb meri milke sab nikaal rahe hai.!!Sleepy

so was busy with family.Big smile

Good ... Family also deserves to be with you exclusively... Smile



Big smile

they deserve some of my pranks as well!!LOL
prankster Sweety ... in form Wink


well was never out of the form.!!Wink

Only covered by books!LOL
Happy Sunday all!
Me dancing, Papa is coming!!!Party
Wow !!!

have a great time and lots of fun... Big smile

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Onir

This part had so many lovely moments'.that after reading I just wanted to jump in and give you a big tight hug. (I guess I did that virtually') Thanks for writing such a beautiful sweet & adorable story & making each part such a sweet memory to cherish.

If it wasn't for you all, this story would have still been in the notes of my iPod with only the first chapter written. So thank you! Hug

Each & everything in the whole update spoke of emotions in different forms'. Be it friendship, sadness & maturely dealing with a loss, attraction, admiration, awareness, & love'  A complete package for the readers, if giving such updates takes you time then I honestly don't mind waiting.

You don't mind if I take even more time for the chapters? You sure? LOL

Loved how Geet is so affected by his smile & always wants to see him smiling & not at all sad or low due to any incidence in his life. Even if it her going a slightly deviant form her usual nature to be peppy in front of him to keep him smiling. What I admired the most in Maan (Actually there is much more to the list that will follow later) is he is a true friend. He instantly agreed to take Anya along with them on their outing. Not only Geet but me too fell a little more for him here. Lucky Geet to have such a person who loves her (though she isn't aware yet'. ) And lucky Anya to have a friend like Maan in her life.

If the person is like Maan, I doubt anyone will be able to see him gloomy! Embarrassed And I'm going to wait for you to disclose that list.

The bonding these four friends share is so strong & beautiful. The concern for Ayush, worry on how he is coping with the situation & their dealing with it all'.was very well portrayed. Aysuh is someone I quite like here. I always have a soft corner for second leads. Ayush-Anya are now included in that list as well. Ayush is one person with varying shades. His liveliness is infectious yet he has a very mature side to him as well. I liked how he with his words & gestures brought the whole group out of the gloomy aura they were getting surrounded with. A-A wanting their own private time after few days gap was so sweet. M-G understanding it, seeing through the excuses'. Which certainly was paid off by A-A giving them their time in private (A whole day) though in disguise by backing out. I wonder did A-A too go on an outing or to say a real date? Also loved how Ayush challenged the tortoise to take steps towards progressing his story.

I think every person who portrays to be a lively and mostly childish person has a very mature side to him. That is how Ayush is to me. Glad you're liking Ayush and Anaya! I hadn't really thought much about AA going on a date because I was so busy with the leads. LOL

Loved all the scenes of Maaneet bonding'. The laptop scene where Maan was lost in her was equally reciprocated by the shooting game scene where Geet got lost in him. The awareness & attraction they feel towards each other is so real & yet subtle. The library scene was too good. Hayee'. I would consider it to be as an almost hug'(I know it wasn't but yet') lovely, especially the awareness & feel of it all that Geet had after a long time too did convey a lot. I agree that libraries & studying there does give rise to a lot of love stories'. Seen a lot may during my library days' & still seeing them when I go to study'.

Yes, they're equally attracted towards each other and most of the times, aware of it too. I know about libraries being the auspicious places of the ignition of love stories, courtesy TV and films, but this one story started from the common room. Embarrassed

I love this Maan' as I have already said so many times. His blushing while Mom & Ranbir tease him, him going through his & Geet's text convos, he sneakily trying to get Geet's number from His Mom, and that scene where his mobile slips & hits his head making him realise of his dewaanapan.

He's absolutely adorable for me with all these little things you've mentioned! Smile

I really admired the implicit trust Geet has on Maan. Her not taking the pepper spray, knowing that Maan will always be there for her; which was proved in the lift scene as well as during the tower visit. Also how she recollected the two incidences related to them shows she treasures those all moments.

She trusts him and he lives up to her trust... Embarrassed

I loved all the scenes'. The hand holding, sharing of candyfloss, shooting game, duck feeding, laughing over trembling feet due to the gong in the tower, moving through crowded areas in close proximity; all of it just lovely, sweet & adorable. Each of them revealing some aspects of Geet to Maan while some revealing aspects of Maan to Geet. Them getting to know each other well. EmbarrassedHeartSmile

Glad to know that you liked it! I wasn't sure while writing, how it all will turn out as a whole. Smile

The whole scene on the hill top was so beautiful & romantic in its own way. I would say quite realistic progression in their story. When she was speaking of her future plans I too like Maan was holding my breath. I guess Maan has a long way to go.

Probably, yes. He has a long way to go. But does he have enough time to cover that long distance?

Loved the whole dinner' & the pretend date.Heart  Maan ne mauke pe chuaka maara. ClapGreat progression my boy! I don't know how to express in words how I felt reading the whole dinner pretend date'. I was so happy reading it & for few moments was dead & floating in heaven. Especially after reading the almost indirect confession or to say proposal' Heart the words spoken were so true & heartfelt. Beautiful!! Maan was quite bold yet sweet'. Whereas Geet was all upfront showing unaffected taking it as a pretence yet very blushy. Hayee' loved it so very much'.

Ab tortoise bhi toh kabhi na kabhi qadam aagey badhata hai na! Wink

For Maan, the confession, the words he spoke, it was all real. The 'pretence' was just a cover to get his feelings across. Embarrassed

Continue soon'. pretty please... Smile

I hope soon comes sooner!

Thank you Twinnie! Hug

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Maggie.

You already know what I feel about this update and quite frankly I am little speechless after it, and I am not sure what i am going to blabber.
Oh yes, I know how you feel. LOL
Coming to surprise tests, bahaha I never liked normal tests, surprise tests ko like karne ki sawal hi nahi utt thaLOL
I supppose there isn't an existence who likes tests. LOL
And about the mood of the entire group due to the tragedy one faced, it is heartwarming to see the bond they share and as Avi pointed out, it is amazing that Geet who had been quite late to join them had become one of them so soon, and her worrying about Ayush and texting Maan if he would go see Ayush was an example.
Also the maturity Ayush showed proved once again that people are not what they portray to the outer world. The ones who portray to be immature would end up being the wisest of them all in reality. It is amazing how he, who had faced a loss is making his friends see sense and making them understand while it actually have to be the other way around. Brilliant!
Geet's attachment towards the three of them in such a short time is an example of how time isn't a very important requirements in making deep bonds.
Yes, people are not usuall what they portray themselves to be and so it's idiotic of us to judge them the way they show ourselves.
The tiny moments of his protective arms around her when she as much slips and her reactions to them, trust me, made my heart flutter. And I hate to admit this. Damn it. I am not supposed to feel it. But well more on that laterLOL
*Grins*
Once again points go for Ayush for pressing and pushing and planting a seed in Maan's brain. I am liking him very muchLOL
It's only because of Ayush that the 'tortoise' as Onir says, makes some effort! LOL
Not to forget that Maan holding his breath fearing teasing which of course followed and his cheeks turning pink had me give a "Hayyeee" for the banda. Did I tell him he's cute?
Probably, no. But I'll pass your 'he's cute' to him. LOL

This time the phone does slip from my hand and falls on my forehead.

This, was Aaadddooorrraaabbbllleee! Embarrassed
Absolutely! This smiley from you is something I haven't seen. Not that I remember. Big smile
The entire day out was amazing, but I will talk about only the first half. You know why. LOL
I know I know! LOL
I liked it when he closed his ears just like her. You know often we tend to see Maan in FFs be a super man, who will save Geet from every small and big thing. Frankly those would make me yawn, sometimes. Though of course even I tend to write clichesLOL
Well, that Maan is, of course, not what really happens but you know how we all have a weakness for the Maan who swoops in to save and protect his Geet. Embarrassed
But your Maan always, always surprises me by being human. And I love him for that. Not to forget I loved when Geet said "Eeh!"
That's what we say when we are offered our favorite delicacy isn't it?
Oh yes, most of us do squeak that way! LOL
And yes I am loving how you are unraveling a side of her to him, which is unknown to him before.
We all have some sides to us that we don't show everyone. They only come out when we actually spend some time with someone...
The little incident he recounted of him and Ranbir chasing ducks bought back memories. Me and my brother used to do that too. You know we went to our Grandpa's place for one summer, and my Nana ji who loved to have pets got ducks that season. We wanted to see them swim, and hence used to chase them to pool, but they used to squatter away. When we finally gave up, one fine day when we were lazing around in balcony, those badtameez ducks started paddling their legs in the pool looking cuteLOL
Badtameez ducks! LOL
Don't even get me talk about hill top and the scene that followed later. As I told you million times, you made me feel those scenes and I would end up squeak like a chicken instead of saying something and will look dumb.
That's the advantage of this virtual world. I wouldn't actually know that you squeaked and looked dumb. LOL
Now when I think back to the day when we all raised a protest and all to make you post, I confess that I don't regret that day at all. Just a thought gnaws my mind...What if.. What if we hadn't that day?
I would have missed a gem. Ouch
Not only you, I don't regret that day either because it's only this story that's made me realise that I can actually write fiction ad not just the non-fiction articles that I normally write. As of you missing a gem, it wouldn't have been a gem if it weren't for you all! Hug

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kainturakiran

awesome update Clap...
Glad you liked it! Smile
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatema_007

atlast Maan asked her out LOL
and no thanx to him but Ayush Big smile he is such a sweetheart   Heart

Yep, Ayush is a sweetheart! Smile

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