If Only You Saw Me (8) - Page 35

This content was originally posted by: MSmyworldMS

sorry for the late comment

fabulous part re

No problem!
Thanks! 😊

This content was originally posted by: mayyo13

FB pe ek page pe. 😊

NB wala toh kamaal tha! Phir se dekha maine. 😳

Ravi aur Guru ne Pungi baja di milke 😆
Simply Awesome

This content was originally posted by: amks

My comment on NOTE

Editing process takes time, sometime more than what we assume so you don't have to feel sorry. Afterall you edit for our comfort and enjoyment.

And What is this with update day? You think by not giving fixed update date, you will make reader happy.

Then listen (sorry read) , even if you didn't give fixed date for update we will be remain hanging in anticipation of next update anytime. Now, choose by yourself which is better, to keep reader hanging for entire time or just one day.

Secondly About shortening of update. I think , its good idea. Short update twice a week is what I would prefer.
I have considered both the options. But I still believe that promising the readers a certain day for update and not showing up is worse than not having a fixed day. Thanks for your opinion anyway.
My comment on CHAPTER

Looks like Bir-zara mairrage is going to be important event in maneet lovestory. Well waiting for the mairrage. The way you showed, maan's mother missing her husband on this special occasion was nice . We usually miss someone special and loved ones on the moment of happiness.
Yes, the upcoming wedding is an important part of MG's life.
True, it's in moments of happiness that one misses his/her loved ones the most.
Game of Sliding of plates and ayush monologue was too good😆 .
Glad you liked it! 😊
Children are lovely ,sometime cranky but the biggest thing which i always feel. They are biggest kidnnapers. I always become victim of kidnaaping whenever i visit at my relative or friend's place.
There's an off-side to every good thing or person and the same goes for children.
Ayush grandfather's death even after being sad, I liked that you put this ,because life can't give only happiness to you, sometimes we have to go through unexpected situation too and losing of game after that makes it feel real because lack of one of important player will surely affect team.
Ups and downs, happiness and sorrows, wins and losses, that's the way life is...
And now ending my comment for your lovely update with these lines on maan's conditon.

Hath thame yun sath chalna,
Udasi me muskaan lana,
Aisi hi teri hazaaro baatein ,
banati hai mujhe tera deewana.
Great lines again! I really liked them. 😊

Moments about which i have not commented is because of my tired fingers though I liked whole update.
Now, waiting for your next update and some fun moment of maneet.
It's perfectly fine if you don't comment on every single thing in the chapter.
I'm glad to know that you liked it as a whole. 😊

This content was originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

I watched RTM today!! 😳 ❤️

This content was originally posted by: mayyo13

I watched RTM today!! 😳 ❤️

Majaaa ayaaa 😉
Roop Tera Mastana 😳

This content was originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Majaaa ayaaa 😉
Roop Tera Mastana 😳

Maza na aane ka toh sawal hi nahin uthta! 😳 Waise hi I've watched it for the first time after YT got banned. 🤔

This content was originally posted by: mayyo13

Maza na aane ka toh sawal hi nahin uthta! 😳 Waise hi I've watched it for the first time after YT got banned. 🤔

Proxy Zindabaad 😆

This content was originally posted by: heytal

Shaadiwala ghar 😛
this update truly peeks into it
though its still initial stages but discussions, shopping and enjoying everything seems so natural
These are the times when u really get along well , get to know people around you
And u did a fab job 👏
Be it Maan or Geet getting to know Zaara
or the guys handling their shopping etc was so well penned down 😊
Thank you so much Heytal! I'm glad I could capture a bit of the shaadi wala ghar ka essence in the chapter. 😳
Ayush is a true prankster and total nautanki
the pastry scene and his dramebaazi 😆
but in the end Maaneet share a piece 😉
Share karne se pyaar badhta hai 😳
My inspiration for sharing the pastry came from that roti sharing scene. 😳
Felt reall y bad for Ayush
just couldn't imagine him this lost and sad 😒
That's the way reality is... Happiness and sorrows...
They lost the match
I'm sure the winning duo Maan-Ayush will turn it all around 😊
Yes, teamwork can create wonders. 😊

Ice cream and Maaneet 😛
Haaye bonnet pe baith ke ice cream khana was so cute
Geet really opening up for the good and
Taking an initiative to spend quality time together with Maan ☺️
She wanted to lift his mood and so what better than to spend some quality time with him? 😉
Their text messaging each other was also so adorable
Its seems so natural yet special
Loved it
😳
Glad you liked it! 😊
I was smiling through out
Thoroughly enjoyed it
😃
*Grins*
PS : For your note I would prefer shorter ones but more often 😛
Thanks for letting me know. 😊

This content was originally posted by: Luvforever

d part was lovely... d feelings r mutual on both sides bt geet is yet nt ready to confess her feelings to even herself bt maan has accptd & nw wanna confess to her... looking 4ward to der going around... cont soon...

Glad you liked it. Yes, Maan has accepted the feelings to himself. Let's see when or how or if he'll confess them on front of Geet. 😊Edited by mayyo13 - 11 years ago

This content was originally posted by: impoojaverma

congrats for new thread
update was fab
arjun-zara are going to be married in a month
geet realize she is going to miss all the three frndz of her specially maan

Thank you! I'm glad to know you liked it. 😊
By the way, it's Ranbir-Zara. 😆