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Aasthahere

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 8:24am | IP Logged

Hey guys I'm Aastha. Well this the first time I'm attempting sumthing like this and posting it here. Embarrassed

It was raining outside so i suddenly got inspired and penned the following poem. Plz do read it and tell me how it is.And guys plz suggest  me  suome titles.Thanks

TCSmile

A Rainy Night

A dark night

Full of mystery

Winds blowing

Wild and free

 

A girl at the window

Looking at the sky

Clouds are all she sees

And lets out a sigh

 

"Why is life such a journey?

Why do I Feel so lonely

Oh God, what wrong have I done?

That even the moon has hidden away from me"

 

She closes her eyes

Not expecting an answer

A drop of water falls on her face

Making her stir

 

"Where did the drop come from?"

Was it her pain coming out as a tear

Or was it from Him

Who really was listening to her from There.

 

Splash! Another drop

Fell on her cheek

She smiled

Which she hadn't since weeks

 

Slowly,slowly more drops started to fall

Till it began to pour

The girl watching this

Was fascinated more and more

 

These pearls called rain

Coming down like a blessing

Quenching the earth's thirst

Making it dance and sing

 

The girl could hear its song

In sync with the rhythm of the rain

Such divine music

Could make anyone insane

 

She started getting into a trance

Her eyes reflecting tears

She couldn't help herself

From down the stairs

 

 She approached the door

Which was closed as always

Just like the innocent and carefree girl

Who only in her heart stays

 

She opened the door

To life,to joy

Leaving behind all pain,

Agony and lies

 

She stood there

With her arms opened wide

Her heart finally opened

Now there was nothing to hide

 

Each drop traveling from head to toe

Wiping away all loneliness and bad memories

To lay bare the carefree and jolly girl

Which she used to be

 

She looked around to see

All the droplets dancing

"I do have someone with whom

 I can be just me and my feelings"

 

She let out a laugh

Which sounded like Church bells ringing?

Being her own pure self again

She started to dance and sing

 

Jumping and laughing

Free from sorrows and worries

Feeling fortunate to see this spectacle

Bowed down to her all flowers and trees

 

 

Somewhere far above

A smile spread on His face

Sits her Father who

Looks at her and says

 

" My beloved

The fault is not yours

The world is not good enough for you

That's the cause

 

You are too pure for your fellow people

So there is no need to despair

You have done no wrong

Therefore, there is nothing to fear

 

A human is not worthy of you

Hence, I have sent

My love and blessings in guise of rain

To be your friends "

 

She dances away the night

Like an angel born from the grace of  the Lord

All the pearls of rain giving company

To the daughter of God.

 

 

 



Edited by Aasthahere - 09 April 2013 at 8:25am

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 8:47am | IP Logged

wow astha my dear ur so talented...

loved it to d core...

its beautiful...

tfd pm...

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 10:38am | IP Logged
great job my little aasthu, this is amazing! Looking forward to more. Miss youu Hug

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Hey Aastha! tht ws so beatiful!
i ws never a fan of poems,bt after reading ur work i guess i can't wait for more! :D
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Its Fab aasthu!! Big smile

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Aasthu! My sweetheart! So good and beautiful!
It's simply a Gorgeous poem! Loved it! and yeah,Missin ew re.. :(

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Asthu..its so lovely and beautiful poem.
you should write more...loved it totally.[:L]
Keep writingSmile

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Oh my dear lil girl<3
It is so beautiful! Felt like I was dancing in the rain getting all wet.
Keep writing more 


Edited by hunnybunch - 14 April 2013 at 11:42am

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