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Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#4, Epilogue-p27 (Page 9)

Rasgulla_sp IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 1:36am | IP Logged
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Payal has a thing for the quirky? And Arnav didnt figure it out? Payal sent her jeth to get these things? Even if it was only a ploy to get Arnav into that room that was quite a strange list she handed over to Arnav...
 
You described the entire dance, the hipbelt adorned hip movements, Khushi's sexiness... everything so well, I am not surprised that Arnav wanted to rip her clothes away Blushing
 
But our dearest Khushi left him high and dry... If he wants the entire package, he will have to marry. Bas!
 
I liked that you showed Arnav's rationalization abt why he wants to marry Khushi. It is not just physical. He has truly found his match
 
I was wondering what the condition was and then came the Sallu towel dance. I HATE YOU N_B. BAS! Angry
 
Cake shoving  LOL with a twist.. I mean a ring...
 
Ab kiss toh banta hain Embarrassed
 
Yeh kissne kiss ka kissa dekha?


Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 10 May 2013 at 1:55am

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 1:42am | IP Logged
awww..he proposed...how cute..and the sexy lap dance was definitely nostalgic...Wink
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Interesting chapter.
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged
wait is indeed worth..


awesome
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 2:35am | IP Logged
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khushi! Blushing
wow! this update blew me away!
just too good! Embarrassed
hope you are well now :)


Edited by ipkknd_hazel - 10 May 2013 at 2:42am
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 2:39am | IP Logged
hehheh I cannot stop grinning! Nbji late aanalum latest ah vantheal! :D 

superb update so it was all well planned! and trust me when I reda the part where payal asked for all those hardware's I was like shit she took her sg seriously and is going to be wild! poor Akash! :P

aww what a way to use the black minx! superb man! Asr lost his cool there! :P

and heheh his dance was also superb! cake le ring ainch ainch!

but the best was how you described what family members like the most! everything acceptable but payal = detergents?? :P

get a room seriously! who was it? ;)

Cheers
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
you made us wait but it was worth the wait ...loved it 
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 3:08am | IP Logged
Amazing update.
Loved it.

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