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Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#4, Epilogue-p27 (Page 28)

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Thank you lovely ladies, this was an amazing story with all of you on board.

Hope you come up with many more.

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
I had myself forgotten that Shyam is a doctor! Stupid me!

And trust Anjali to trouble her Chotay on his SR... This woman na!

Good that Khushi thought about 'performance anxiety' or else if they had stayed in Shantivan SR ka S bhi shuru nahi hota...

And finally they did IT right! Embarrassed

I liked the touch of how he became more important than her precious gotas and she became more important than his work.

And we come a full circle at the Epilogue. Starts with Anjali in labour and ends with the little rajkumari. But ArHi are busy Embarrassed and Anjali can wait for a while.

Great Epilogue Juhi! Thumbs Up

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
That was an amazinggg update!!!

Enjoyed reading this ff,thnx to all the writers for sharing your work with us
Loved reading epilogue to bitss

Amazinggg update!!!

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 10:44am | IP Logged
This was one crazy ride that had me in stitches from the laughs while reading the story.  You ladies were brilliant!  Take a bow!  Thank you for writing this - I got a chance to know some new writers whose stories have been read very avidly!  The boy who cried wolf got her due - no Chotay for her, she will have to make do with Dayya Ho!  Our happy couple can finally let out all the pent up passions - no more cold showers for them.  Hope you gals come back with another one!  Cheers!

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Crazy...absolutely crazy mad family...Enjoyed reading it...thank god arnav and khushi left the house or else in this life at least there was no chance of consummation with the presence of anjali...This was absolutely fantastic :)

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged

Oh my what an epilogue that was.. absolutely loved it...

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Beautiful ending

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 11:04am | IP Logged
one, arnav should have throttled them with his bare hands. i would have
two, he did the right thing by taking her away
three, anjali deserves to be ignored as she cried wolf once too often

four, the last daiya ho request was a masterstroke


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