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Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#4, Epilogue-p27 (Page 23)

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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
Well worth the wait!  Poor Arnie just want to get physical and Kushi wants to play bride!  Love the dialogue of doing the rasams backwards - that was so cute ji! Thank you for sparring us the suhag Raat in the suitcase.  Instead our pent up boy, had to cool himself and patiently go through each rasam.  Payal is taking charge but she does not realize that the meek hubby is simply playing her too.  Then it finally happened - nothing to stand between our Arhi's passion but the constant interruption in their life even with a locked door - Di !  Of course she needs Arnie and not Dayya Ho!  Well I guess there is some more waiting for our couple - I can't imagine what will happen when they actually get to it with all this waiting they are doing.  Nice work!

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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
worth the wait!Clap

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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
awesome update saiyyu!!! loved it...it was fun to read!!

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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Lmao is not the word to be used here! Lol!! Its all about doing it, right? Isn't it? Heheehe

Cho chaad and Anjali one comedy piece only she is! Lol! Her sense for timing I swear no one can beat at it! Gawd bless her!

And lol if former part of the update Arnav was left high and dry wanting to Do it!! Latter part Khushi! Revenge is sweet boss!!

She and her love for gotas, sudden fascination for SRKs dialogue and her theory of Arnavs towel dance!!

Hmm Anjali finally labour hour! Phew a full stop to her high and dry emotions!

Can't wait for the epilogue!!

Cheers

Ps: Doing it right, detail main yeh just the right amount! :p

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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Definitely worth the wait.

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ankii543 Goldie
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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
OhMG...thats the limit of desperation...
Cant keep their hands off each other...lol
payal is crazy...runnunig to do it better...poor akash...
Oh thats sooo wicked of anjali...
Lier lier pants on fire...
Khushii...mrs smartypants...wife of mr smartypants who is not so smart right now...

Nice update...
Worth the wait...
Here we come to the final chapter...
Ill miss this story..a loot...
It was a great great journey...
Thanx to all the writers for ther chapters n collaboration...^_^

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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Arnav Singh Raizada wanted an Amazing Suhaag Raat. dat was hilarious 
anji had 2 distrb dr moment asusual 
awsum updt


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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Trust you to think of creative full forms for ASR LOL
awesome update! xD

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