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Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#4, Epilogue-p27 (Page 12)

aarrsshhii IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
awesome... quite romaaantic... and the proposal was simply beautiful... 

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
what a lovely proposal!!!!!!!!!!!!

tanda tanda pani still not cooling down the garmi of his jism   That line got me dying...i am crying from all the laughing after i read that line

i wonder who was that at the ends
cannot wait for the last chapter and then epilogue
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Just the first paragraph and I was in splits.

"Sticks and stones may break my bones but chains and whips excite me."

Oh Arnavji, there is so much you don't know about your sweet sister in law.

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
This was hilarious. I loved Arnav's confession and the way he asked her to marry him. I am still laughing at this part:

"Kushi continued to dance and then she slowly approached Arnav like a tiger would approach its prey, like Anjali would approach a pooja ki thaal, like Mami would approach a box of cosmetics, like Akash would approach his glasses, like Payal would approach a box of detergent. "
ROFL ROFL ROFL

Naach_Basanti, you really lived up to your name today by making these two naach as well! Clap
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Glad there was an update
it was fab
Khushi's seductive dance
Arnav being balled over by her and realising why he loves her and that he is willing to get married because finally he has found his match
Arnav then dancing and proposing properly to her
Someone witnessing their passionate kiss..most likely either Anjali or Akaash/Payal
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Hayeee really really nice , romantic n mushy mushy update.


Aweeew I loved the proposal n after that also. Wink
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
wow, what a beginning: whips, chains, handcuffs, metal chains... didn't know the raizadas were into kinky stuff, unless this is part of the dungeon they might have had in days of yore to throw their enemies into! a wonderful list of similes: like Anjali would approach a pooja ki thaal, like Mami would approach a box of cosmetics, like Akash would approach his glasses, like Payal would approach a box of detergent. keeping in character and damn apt! when he looked at how Kushi moved her waist all the rational thoughts flew out of his mind and like every other hot blooded man he stopped thinking... no truer words have been spoken... it's so easy to control men through their libido LOL! hahaha, by denying him a passionate liplock and opting for a chaste forehead kiss, khushi has arnav exactly where she wants  him! the tanda tanda pani still not cooling down the garmi of his jism... the expressions you come up with are damn hilarious!
 
arnav's reasons for not marrying are pretty simple but sensible and his moment of realisation was nicely portrayed... also khushi's blend of confidence, innocence and vulnerability was beautifully brought out... even their proposal is unique... loved the way they challenge each other... their married life will never be boring... kudos to khushi for her successful 'seduction' and for not letting arnav off the hook before laying down a condition! never in my wildest dreams thought of such a simile: she felt like she was swimming in a pool of jalebis. Clap! arnav's proposal was touching in its simplicity... loved the manner in which you incorporated the scenes from the show, and the pleasant twist you gave to that horrid 'shoving cake down the birthday girl's throat' scene from the show... khushi's irritated 'I love you, dammit!' was the proverbial cherry on top!
 
this long wait for an update was well worth it!
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
aww that was lovely.

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