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Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#4, Epilogue-p27 (Page 10)

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
That was great!! Loved the thumkas khushi pulled!!! Needless to say the Raizada brothers are never going to be bored in thier married lives!!

The proposal made me laugh... Its not your birthday... But I am going to make you ear cake and you are going to enjoy it and say yes!!!

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Aawww they are getting married loved it, btw how are you feeling now??-
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 11:27am | IP Logged
a part which had sexiness hotness cuteness sweetness and happiness..everything...each emotion was so damn awesome...SUPERB
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
awesome... quite romaaantic... and the proposal was simply beautiful... 
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
what a lovely proposal!!!!!!!!!!!!

tanda tanda pani still not cooling down the garmi of his jism   That line got me dying...i am crying from all the laughing after i read that line

i wonder who was that at the ends
cannot wait for the last chapter and then epilogue
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Just the first paragraph and I was in splits.

"Sticks and stones may break my bones but chains and whips excite me."

Oh Arnavji, there is so much you don't know about your sweet sister in law.

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
This was hilarious. I loved Arnav's confession and the way he asked her to marry him. I am still laughing at this part:

"Kushi continued to dance and then she slowly approached Arnav like a tiger would approach its prey, like Anjali would approach a pooja ki thaal, like Mami would approach a box of cosmetics, like Akash would approach his glasses, like Payal would approach a box of detergent. "
ROFL ROFL ROFL

Naach_Basanti, you really lived up to your name today by making these two naach as well! Clap
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Glad there was an update
it was fab
Khushi's seductive dance
Arnav being balled over by her and realising why he loves her and that he is willing to get married because finally he has found his match
Arnav then dancing and proposing properly to her
Someone witnessing their passionate kiss..most likely either Anjali or Akaash/Payal

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