wow, what a beginning:
whips, chains, handcuffs, metal chains... didn't know the raizadas were into kinky stuff, unless this is part of the dungeon they might have had in days of yore to throw their enemies into! a wonderful list of similes:
like Anjali would approach a pooja ki thaal, like Mami would approach a box of cosmetics, like Akash would approach his glasses, like Payal would approach a box of detergent. keeping in character and damn apt!
when he looked at how Kushi moved her waist all the rational thoughts flew out of his mind and like every other hot blooded man he stopped thinking... no truer words have been spoken... it's so easy to control men through their libido 😆! hahaha, by denying him a passionate liplock and opting for a chaste forehead kiss, khushi has arnav exactly where she wants him!
the tanda tanda pani still not cooling down the garmi of his jism... the expressions you come up with are damn hilarious!
arnav's reasons for not marrying are pretty simple but sensible and his moment of realisation was nicely portrayed... also khushi's blend of confidence, innocence and vulnerability was beautifully brought out... even their proposal is unique... loved the way they challenge each other... their married life will never be boring... kudos to khushi for her successful 'seduction' and for not letting arnav off the hook before laying down a condition! never in my wildest dreams thought of such a simile: she felt like she was swimming in a pool of jalebis. 👏! arnav's proposal was touching in its simplicity... loved the manner in which you incorporated the scenes from the show, and the pleasant twist you gave to that horrid 'shoving cake down the birthday girl's throat' scene from the show... khushi's irritated 'I love you, dammit!' was the proverbial cherry on top!
this long wait for an update was well worth it!
