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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 6:27am | IP Logged
okk guyss i know i have to complete my ff (can love happen twice) but i  had this another story ready ,, so had to write it ,, dont know how long or short it will go ,, so,,,, wil do it according to the responses,,
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a grl " ita a crazy nigh today "
another grl " it is ,,, lets see how we can profit from it (giving a wink to the 1st grl)"

" hey hey here comes the customers " said some1.
one of the grls signalling the car's passenger " do u need a date tonight ,, you wont be dissapointed"
driver " oh really how r u so sure "
grl " we wil satisfy you till you want "
passenger " so how much "
grl " 500 an hour " 

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" oh god its soo clod tonight ,, nd might rain too " said she ,,
in the dim street light was seen a petite figure waiking the side way making her way through the busiest nights of th e GOLDEN NEST . " god i need to reach fast,, im late ,, they must be waiting..nd i cant dissapoint them ,, its my job i love doing it." said SHE as she made her way thru one of the busiest areas of the city were day began after sunset ,, the GOLDEN NEST ,, one of the biggest prostitute areas.

" hey TAANI ,,,, were r u runing late again ?? " shouted some1
" ya sweety as usual ,, nd i must hurry cant talk to you now cya later "
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 " woo hooo hooo its freedom night" shouted vicky ,, rising the beer bottle in air celebrating the last day of the frst year in college.. as the Jeep speed past the water clogged streets.

"REY aur teez aur teez "
"vicky ,, sit down ,,, ur too drunk,, we r already flying " replied REYANSH a.k.a REY... the spoilt brat of one of the richest persons in town. 

They had just got their results out nd have passed their 1st year in college nd had bocome a senior it was party night .

" baby slow down i am scared " exclaimed his present day GF.. actuli he believes in change ,, even if its GF.

" aww dont u worry ,, main hoon na " said rey nd slipped his hand thru her alredy short top ,,,, to hold her tightly to him.
" is it okay now"
"ooo much better ,,, u know i like it wen u tese me like dis.. it arouses me "said the gf
"is it so .." asked rey ,, nd pulled her close enough to have a liplock pressing her body to his nd his hand exploring entirely through.
" oh god rey givee me a break... just concentrate on driving " sighed vicky
"chill dude i guess ur jealous" resuming his kiss 
" oh plss ,,, " sighed vicky 

but rey was busy ,, in his heaven smooching further nd pressing hard.. the heat was seen in the speed of the car. They croosed a red light ,, broke the signal ,,speeded up throu the yellow light,, it was their passion filled nights.well it had to be they were crossing thru GOLDEN NEST..

But suddenly 

screeech

as he pushed the brakes hard...
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in front stood a grl in white ,,the jeep was just an inch away from her.

Lights was on her face,,, nd she was trying hard to block them from falling on her
Rey finally broke off from his engagement, "oh freak "

"duuude breakkk "shouted vicky.
the heart was pacing for the three of them.

"re dekh ke nahin chal sakti " shouted vickey 

"dude iski kya galti hum hi galat ilake me aa gaye ,," said rey as he looked around.

she adjusted herself nd moved away from teh street nd started walking her way ,, but rey was curious to see her ,, 
thet perfec figure,, that slender long arms,, that perfect curved belly was reason enough for him to have her..

" oh hello ,, miss oops sry mistress,, ha ha ha" laughed vicky nd rey..

" re sunti jao ,," barged rey moving the car forward.
she stopped " do you have a probelm ,,, what do you want "
"you " said rey ..
"what the hell " said she nd moved forward 
" re what the rate.. we can easily afford come on baby ,, itne nakhre to meri GF bhi nahin karti " said rey 
she stood dere for a second..closed her eyes nd moved forward.
" re tell me how much to you charge for an hour ,, for a night "
said rey
" go to hell"said she 
" re this is heaven dear what do you need hell " siad rey
they were still following her ,, 
she wanted to give them an answer she turned back but only her half eyes were seen ,,,"you "
 "taani its soo late ,,, y r you soo late they r waiting " said a lady as she grabe her hand to pull her inside the house

"ah man ,,, she is gone it seems "sighed vicky
"hmm ... " sighed rey ,, nd speed up the jeep.. 
he looked back again ,,,, " taani "
"what did you say something " asked the gf ...
" no nothing atall babez " replied rey nd drove away...




chapter 1 :: page 1
chapter2 : page 5
chapter 3 : page 12
chapter 4 : page 15



[ tell me how is it guyss did u like it or not ,,, should i continue it ??? leave ur replies nd suggestions ]  

 


Edited by piyaLovesJENSEN - 23 November 2013 at 2:57am

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 6:41am | IP Logged
really like the concept... =)
and cheezzz...do not like rey's character...but well...rey toh rey hai...
btw i love the title...its really unique...
continue soon =)

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Awesome dear :) just loved it ... It's really very different wow will b amazing dear :) Plz-2 update soon :)

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Wow I love the concept so unique hmm Taani a working girl and Rey the spoil brat interesting combination. Plx continue soon u doing a fab job

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 6:52am | IP Logged
omg pritha this is so differen concept ...omg rey is so ***Dead
nyways update soon...n abt taani umm is she prostitute i still hav a doubt ...continue soon

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 6:52am | IP Logged
THE STORY SEEMS REALLY UNIQUE  AND EXCITING ,LOOKING FORWARD FOR THE NXT UPDATE !!DONT FORGET TO PM ME!!!!Big smile

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Its grt
Update soon dear...

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 7:00am | IP Logged
oyeee concept bahut diferent hai nd i loved it so plzzz continue soon Wink

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