Originally posted by: Rin03This is me after reading your OS:
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I loved it! <333
Sweetie, for your first time that was beautifully written! The flow of your writing is wonderful, I love the way you construct the scene with the characters and their emotions in such a simple and short manner.
Your the kind of writer who can send your readers imagination on overdrive with short passage. I like how you dont use long descriptions or oxford dictionary ke bade bade words!
Most often writers tend to write passages of descriptions to prove their point but you can drive home your point with just a sentence and thats is amazing talent!
Would love to read more from u babes!
Aab OS ke story ki baat kare,
THIS is how I want to be in the show!
Less talking and more doing 😉
I can most definitely imagine Zoya reacting in that manner if she was confronted by Asad like that 😆
Bechari wont know what hit her when Asad decides to let finally bring out his true desires out in the open!
Asad was just... *swoons* 😳
You left ne grinning from ear to ear and blushing at Asad's behavior and dreams!
Do continue writing more!
Maybe join the OS contest!! 😃
p.s: would u believe this is the fifth time I wrote up this review? It kept getting deleted. IF is such a pain to use in the cell!
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