Qubool Hai

FF | Unrestrained Passion | Part3 PG 23(new)

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"As if you were on fire from within.

The moon lives in the lining of your skin."
-Pablo Neruda


His hands slowly trailed up her bare legs. He smirked at her half closed eyes and mouth parted in delirious pleasure. He had spent hours caressing every curve, every slip of her soft, soft form.

He wasn't nearly done. He couldn't get enough of her.

He suddenly flipped them over so that she was on top, her long legs coming to rest on either side of him, straddling him. Her eyes widened in slight surprise.

Then she smirked. Always the vixen and damn if that didn't turn him on more. She leaned in placing butterfly kisses on his face, her long eyelashes fluttering across his cheeks. Her hands threaded across his thoroughly messed up hair and pulled him towards her, crushing their parted lips together.

They hummed that familiar tune of moans, groans and lips parting.

His hands grabbed her waist sliding her downwards, where he needed her most..


"Mr Khan, wake up Mr Khan, breakfast is ready. Mr Khan.."

Sweat glistened off his forehead and his breath came out in short gasps. This couldn't be happening to him. This was the third time he was dreaming about her in this way.

The dreams had been innocent at first, with him asking her to stay and holding her hands but not anymore.

She consumed his mind, her body drove him crazy, and her voice left him dazed.

He groaned.

"Mr Khan? Are you alright? "

As always she barged into his room without a care, strutting and hair perfect.Her eyes landed on his bare chest and widened in surprise and her lips parted in that familiar fashion that was driving him crazy.

He closed his eyes in a sheer effort to control his feelings and calm his racing heart beat. He slowly counted to ten and then opened his eyes. He stood up.

"Miss Farookie I'll be out in a minute." He said, trying to pass off a semi controlled voice.

But she wasn't paying attention. Her eyes slowly assessed his form from his broad shoulders, to his washboard abs and lower, where his pyjama hung low on his hips showing off that sinful V.

Did she have any idea what it did to him when she stared at him?

Of course she didn't.

When he caught her staring she immediately started her babbling. Going on about how she just wanted to know if he was coming out for breakfast and that she was just surprised to find him still asleep and..He couldn't bother paying attention. He could only see her plump lips open and close, her eyes wide and apologetic, her slender neck ..

Maybe it was his dream and the fact that she was just standing there, maybe he was just tired of holding back, but he walked towards her, slow measured steps and she immediately shut up.

Her eyes, again, widened and a slow blush spread across her cheeks as she noticed that his eyes were strained on her.

She didn't move back, instead she held his gaze, staring right back at him.

He went towards her, closer and closer, till they were almost touching. Her back arched trying to look up at him.

He leaned in a bit more and she slipped. His hands immediately came to rest about her waist, catching her and unintentionally pulling her closer to himself.

"Careful Miss Farookie."

"Mr Khan, what...Mr Khan... "

He left her stuttering.

That was a first.

He was fascinated.

He let his hands slowly push her hair back, slightly brushing across the nape of her neck. He felt a shiver run though her.

Interesting.

Very interesting.

He smirked slightly and moved back as if nothing had happened.

"I'll be out soon Miss Farookie."

"Mr Khan.. what just.."

"What just, what Miss Farookie?"

"You just..."

"I just...?"

"But, right now..."

"Spit it out Miss Farookie"

She gulped, swiftly turned back and almost ran.

Interesting.

So he wasn't alone in this.

She was as affected by him as he was by her.

Oh Miss Farookie, you're going to find out just how emotionally challenged I'm not.

~RC

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Hey ...
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👏 barely waiting for next chapter! love Asad's emotional chalenge"non existing !Edited by cosmina - 11 years ago
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👏 barely waiting for next chapter! love Asad's emotional chalenge"non existing !


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Posted: 11 years ago
This is me after reading your OS:


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I loved it! <333


Sweetie, for your first time that was beautifully written! The flow of your writing is wonderful, I love the way you construct the scene with the characters and their emotions in such a simple and short manner.
Your the kind of writer who can send your readers imagination on overdrive with short passage. I like how you dont use long descriptions or oxford dictionary ke bade bade words!
Most often writers tend to write passages of descriptions to prove their point but you can drive home your point with just a sentence and thats is amazing talent!
Would love to read more from u babes!


Aab OS ke story ki baat kare,

THIS is how I want to be in the show!

Less talking and more doing 😉

I can most definitely imagine Zoya reacting in that manner if she was confronted by Asad like that 😆
Bechari wont know what hit her when Asad decides to let finally bring out his true desires out in the open!


Asad was just... *swoons* 😳
You left ne grinning from ear to ear and blushing at Asad's behavior and dreams!

Do continue writing more!

Maybe join the OS contest!! 😃

p.s: would u believe this is the fifth time I wrote up this review? It kept getting deleted. IF is such a pain to use in the cell!Edited by Rin03 - 11 years ago
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It's nice!!! Do continue ;)
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Wow! RC, this is wonderful...👏

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I M like ..gasping for air.. this one surely set my imagination crazy..
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