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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushruthi

Awesome ending 
totally loved it 
Great work 
hats off...

thank you
so much
awnn so sweet of you

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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 8:06am | IP Logged
hiii sweet sisi



as usual asssmmm updatee


i cant belive komal do all thiss


but u was right i never pridict that


its mean that uday knw that manyata is hypnotised on thier wedding night that is seriously a shock


i love the nishiganda scene its mean manyata herself is her insecters


sooo manveer's daughter has more powers then her mother



and last uday saying about their second suhagrat was awsssmmm



manyata fall from stair case but how her daughter can die she is a charmlet


love the storyy over all


and give us book 2 i want it and dont take is as request its an order my dear


love u puff pastryy bye bi

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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by huma12.

hiii sweet sisi
hey hunney bunney
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as usual asssmmm updatee

thank you
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i cant belive komal do all thiss
this is the game of power
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but u was right i never pridict that

and moreover i misguided you all by making sure uday is behind this
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its mean that uday knw that manyata is hypnotised on thier wedding night that is seriously a shock

yes he made her do what he wanted
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i love the nishiganda scene its mean manyata herself is her insecters
yes she is you are right
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sooo manveer's daughter has more powers then her mother


and her father too she has most power than clan ever had
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and last uday saying about their second suhagrat was awsssmmm


ahh thank you a treat for you
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manyata fall from stair case but how her daughter can die she is a charmlet

that is just the way she wanted to be bornIcon Monkey Yoyo
love the storyy over all


and give us book 2 i want it and dont take is as request its an order my dear

but jiji no one seems interest coz only you and krishna jiji mentioned till no about book 2
love u puff pastryy bye bi


love you too hunny bunnyMonkey Emoticons Yoyo

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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 8:54am | IP Logged
wow such an awesome ending!!!!
well im very very sad
as there would be no more magical man veer!!
but its OK all the parts were just mind blowing...
a superb and perfect ending dear!!!!
aweeesssooommmeee...
no words to express..
loved it loads

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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MAHI1198

wow such an awesome ending!!!!
well im very very sad
as there would be no more magical man veer!!
but its OK all the parts were just mind blowing...
a superb and perfect ending dear!!!!
aweeesssooommmeee...
no words to express..
loved it loads

thank you
why dear
there will be if i am allowed with a book 2
where manveer child maya will fall for veer
but do not think that possible as elast people are showing interest

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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snowdream

Originally posted by annabh

Originally posted by snowdream

Originally posted by annabh

Originally posted by snowdream

That was awesomeClapClapClap..
Loved it a lotBig smile..
i am so happy that you liked it twino for you only i made it longer as you know this lazy bones cannot afford more than 15 chappyBig smile
lols my twino jaan love u Hug
love you too
awwwHug
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OMG so it was all Komal...Hunh never imagined a mother could do something like this.AngryAngryAngry.Hurting and killing her own daughter..Poor Bridjraaj he was a prey in Komal's evilness...Dead
yes the one we never accept tends to hurt us the most same happened here although i tried to misguide everybody by putting uday in  my comment yes she was the witch to control them
Naughty girl...misguiding us... but for this wonderful end saat khoon maafApproveApproveApprove
haha paar that was just to excite all so that  the ending  when you all read will get more happier
lol nice planLOL
hehe i am saitaan dramebaazWink

And poor Soni(karishma) she too became a puppet as Bridjraaj...
but she did it on purpose for her benifit
Poor girl didn't realised what she was doingConfusedConfusedConfused
yes coz to her mom was her world like all of us but she was misguided
ya poor girl and at the end got killed by her own motherConfused
to save her sister how family play tricksOuch

Uday hayy my hero was all there  but u know somewhere in this SS Manyata took over UdayLOLLOLLOL
yes i do know that what the name suggest princess btw jiji humara herooWink
Ya Manyata is whole a part of him so chalegaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
yes they complete each other
trueTongue
that is why love is the cure of all problemEmbarrassed

But really enjoyed to know that Uday identified the spell and made Manyata his toy...Lol...What sall he made her do...LOLLOLLOL Poor Manyata...
yes he is really naughty but actually he knew if he did not do so then komal would have finished her that very moment coz she would know that her plan is backfired
ya that too is true but he did enjoyed her the way he wished toLOL kya kya nahi karvayi Manyata seWinkWinkWink
woa toh hai naughty prince will never get over his antiques
hayyyBlushing
ehpehi toh hum marteh haii so how was the twistTongue


And also the quote pure magic start from the embrace of your loved ones...
yes i heard it somewhere so thought it putting here
But excellent in this context SmileSmileSmile
awn glad i thought people will not like it glad it touched my twino eyes
all will love itThumbs Up

And Baby awww she was super cute...
yes found her on a social network sight and loved her innocence
lolsThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up

Now i really want book 2 Anni...pls do it pls...Big smile
but book two will be of maya and veer like same but their daughter and i do not think others will have the same response
hunh lets see what others say..and majority wins thee gameBig smileBig smileBig smile
ok only if you all are intrested than i would make princess 2 even more romantic and rowdry but will have to kill manyata and udayveer coz maya and veer story will begin
aww that Confused iam still interested lets see what others saySmile
will provide a poll option tonightLOL


and lastly thanks for sucha  beautiful SS..It took my heartEmbarrassed
ahh i am glad it took your heart but no formalities twino
aww love u TwinoHugHugHug


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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Wow !
Such a perfect ending ...
Great work di Clap
Loved it Embarrassed

Coming to the update,
Oh my god !
I never thought Komal could do all this Shocked
And Soni was also involved !
Uday knowing most of it especially that Manyata was hypnotized on their wedding night was shocking AGAIN ... Shocked

Komal could be so selfish Angry
And i think Karishma paid for her deeds by SACRIFICING herself !

The Nishiganda sequence was also nice !

The end after the leap was superb and cute Embarrassed
The baby girl was so sweet !
And she is also very powerful !

I wanted to tell you something ...
You know the plot gets sometimes far - fetched or it becomes sort of illogical in such fantasy stories but you have kept in fantastic. The pace, the storyline and even Komal being alive and Soni/Karishma being involved also didn't seem far - fetched instead in all just fitted in !

You are going to continue it, right ?
I mean to a NEXT BOOK, please ?

It's so good and its the first time i have ever liked a fantasy story to such an extent ! 

Thanks for the PM !

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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by catty2000

Wow !
Such a perfect ending ...
Great work di Clap
Loved it Embarrassed
thank a lot dear sisy

Coming to the update,
Oh my god !
I never thought Komal could do all this Shocked
And Soni was also involved !
Uday knowing most of it especially that Manyata was hypnotized on their wedding night was shocking AGAIN ... Shocked
yes power can make people insane soni too was carried away by the same temptation and well about that night nothing can be said about our naughty prince

Komal could be so selfish Angry
And i think Karishma paid for her deeds by SACRIFICING herself !
yes evils can do anything yes she had to pay for her sins

The Nishiganda sequence was also nice !
thank you i knew i did not mention it earlier as it was meant for the climax

The end after the leap was superb and cute Embarrassed
The baby girl was so sweet !
And she is also very powerful !
yes the most powerful princess the land ever had
I wanted to tell you something ...
You know the plot gets sometimes far - fetched or it becomes sort of illogical in such fantasy stories but you have kept in fantastic. The pace, the storyline and even Komal being alive and Soni/Karishma being involved also didn't seem far - fetched instead in all just fitted in !
awn thank you trust me writing this ss was one of the hardest task as i had to balance each and everything i am glad at the end i did not make a mess instead gave a proper ending

You are going to continue it, right ?
I mean to a NEXT BOOK, please ?
yea only if i get a good response will maybe put a poll option

It's so good and its the first time i have ever liked a fantasy story to such an extent !
awn thank you so much

Thanks for the PM !

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