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TaaRey FF That Second "Pehla Pyaar"*Chapter 2 Up* (Page 8)

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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NSohi13

Hmm for change Taani and Swayam are bf and GF ... Thoda strange hai to digest but let the story come out ... Plz update it soon dear:)

Yeah TaaYam together a bit hard ... but anyways thanks for your comment

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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tbp4ever

Wow dear very nice
Wait 4 chapter 1
Update soon
It seem so interesting
Can't wait plz update so n pm me :)
I'm going to add u 2 buddy list know so don't 4 get to pm me :D

Thanks for your comment ... I will surely pm you ...
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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanayaluvzya

awesome concept!!
pm me!!

Thanks for the comment ! Will update soon and will surely pm you!
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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Chapter 1 – The perfect couple
In the Garden

Sw – Sorry Naa … Bhul gaya mein

T – Oh toh main tumhare liye important nahi hun right!

Sw – Arre Voh main … (Trying to find a reason)

T – Jab bahana mile toh mujhe bata dena ki kyun tum humari date ko bhul gaye!

Sw – Taani Sorry

But Taani was stubborn and was not at all ready to forgive her sweet Swayam so she faced the other side

Sw *thinking* - Agar tum Tanya Rai Prakash hot oh main bhi Swayam Shekhawat hun … Abh dekh lo main kya karta hun

Swayam immediately leaves.

After a while Taani gets suspicious (She does not know Swayam is not there)

T*thinking* - Yeh Swayam kuch bol kyun nahi raha hai

Taani faces the other side not to find Swayam

T*confused* - Swayam kaha chala gaya hai … pehle toh date bhulta hai aur jab maafi maagne aa jaata hai toh khud hi gayab ho jaata hai … Ab main pakka usse maaf nahi karungi.

On the bench she was sitting on she finds a note.

Note: Go to the kulfi stand.

T – Ab yeh kya hai … Uff Let's see.

Taani reaches the kulfi stand and the kulfi vendor, without saying anything, gives her mango kulfi which is her favourite kulfi.

T*confused but a bit happy* - Aare bhaiyya maine toh yeh nahi maanga.

KV – Mam saaheb ek ladka aaya aur mujhe paise diya aur bola ki yeh vali kulfi aapko de aur yeh chiiti bhi diya hai.

T*softly* -Oh toh Mr. Shekhawat yeh aapka plan hai … Let's see what's in the other note.

Note: Pata hai gussa abhi tanda nahi hua hai,even though itna tanda kulfi kha rahi ho par koi baat nahi tum na kulfi khaate khaate beach side par aa jaana aur jo kuch sunana hai vaha par karo

Tumhara Swayu

T – Wow Swayu the pagal mera gussa tanda karna chahta hai …

Taani reaches the beach side and finds 4 people dressed like clowns there

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LiMH3xp-zKw

(Hear this before starting)

Music
(The 4 clowns are circling around her and making funny faces)
One, two, three!
(Taani is super confused)
 Sw :I am a fool, I am a fool
  I am a fool fool fool!
 You big heart, you big heart
 You got very big heart!
(Taani is shocked to see Swayam then later gets angry)
 
 Clown 1: I come near, I come near
I come near near near
You go far, you go far
You go very very far
(The clown moves closer to her and she steps back)
 
  Clown 3:Arey thanda rakh kaleja
Thoda baraf pe ghis le bheja
Sorry le ja, maafi de ja humko free
(The third clown raps in front of her, scaring her a bit)
 
Clown 2:One, two, three!
All:Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bache ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Bache ki loge jaan kya
 
Clown 4:I know you love me and You know I love ya
Hai apne understanding to phir locha-lafda kya
(The clown bring heart shape ballons to her)
Sw:I want a big big smile and
I want it only now
Are! andar se tu okay hai upar se khaye bhav
(Swayam pulls her cheeks forcing her to smile)
Clown 1:Aise kaai ko atka
Tere ghar ka jhadu katka
Tu jo bole kar denge daily free!
(The clown a step as if he is brooming the floor)
 
Clown 3:One, two, three!
All:Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bachche ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Bachche ki loge jaan kya?
 
Sw:Final warning, final warning,
Don't you break my heart
Automatic guilty feeling
One time over smart
(Swayam fakes sadness and shows hand signals as if his heart is breaking)
 
Clown 4:See, see, see can't you see see see
Kitne deep deep deep mere dil ke jazbaat
(The clown goes down showing the deepness)
Clown 1:Hai kaai ko naaraaz
Karle maandavli maharaj
Hum sab aaj ye teri khaaj khuja de free
(Taani melts seeing all this for her and starts smiling)
 
Clown 3:One, two, three!
 All:Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bache ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Clowns: Bache ki loge jaan kya?

Sw – I'm sorry Taani!

Taani goes to Swayam and pinches his cheeks

T – Swayu you are too cute … Itna sab kuch mere liye!

Sw – Well tum ho hi itne special ki tumhe manane ka tarika bhi special hona chaiye right!

T – Okay enough bak-bak … Kahin ghumne chalte hai?

Sw – Anything for you darling!

Taani and Swayam are about to leave when …

?? – Aur HUM?!

They turn around and see the clowns were no other then their friends!

Vi – Girlfriend mil gayi toh humare baare mein bhul gaya!

Ni – Aur nahi toh kya … Tu kya bol raha tha hum ki please please meri help karo

Am – Aur ab jab help ki toh humare baare mein bhul gaya

Bh – Kaisa dost nikla tu!

Taani was surprised to see them and Swayam was trying to hide his face so he won't be embarrassed infront of Taani

Taani was on the verge of laughing but she decided to do something else

T – Mr. Swayam Shekhawat!

Sw – Yes Ma'am!

T – Inn logon ko tumne clowns banaya?!

Sw*softly* – Yes Ma'am

Taani goes up to Vicky

T – Vikramjeet Kalsi!

Vi – Kya yaar Taani tumhe pata hai ki mujhe yeh naam pasand nahi … phir bhi

T*Harsher* - Vikramjeet Kalsi!!

Vi*Scared* - Reporting Ma'am *putting his hand up in salute*

T – Kya kiya Mr. Swayam ne?

Vi – Voh humare paas aaya aur kaha ki usse Taani ko yaani ki aapko patana hai toh uski help kare

T – Hmm … Nilesh Kotian!

Ni – Jii Taanya Ma'am

T – Uske baad kya hua?

Ni – Pehle toh hum sab mana kar rahe the lakin baad mein maan gaye, Bas yahi hua

Meanwhile, Amar and Bharat were having their own conversation

Bh – Yeh Taani Military woman ki tarah baat kyun kar rahi hai

Am – Aare yaad nahi kya, Taani jab bhi gussa ho jaati hai toh aise hi baat karti hai

Bh – Matlab ki Taani ka gussa … hey Bhagwan kya locha hai ab

T – Amar, Bharat!

Amar and Bharat snap out of their conversation

Am&Bh – Haa … T … Taani Madam

T – Tumhe kya lagta hai … Kya Mr. Swayam ko saza milni chaiye

Am*without thinking* - Haa

Bh – Haa isse saza milna chaiye

T – Okay toh Swayam Shekhawat, Tumhara saza yeh hai ki tum apni girlfriend ke saath Main Hoon Na dekhna padega!

Sw – Kya? Phir se! Nahi Yaar …

Taani glares at Swayam to make Swayam quiet

T – Aur tum sab!

Boys – Yes!

T – Apna – apna kaam karo aur jaao yaha se!

All the boys run away from there

T – Toh chale …

Sw – Kaha?

T*with a cheeky smile* – Mere ghar Main Hoon Na dekhne!

Sw – Sach mein dekhna padega?

T – Haa aur nahi toh kya … SRK ki film ke baare mein main Mazak nahi karti hun Okay!

Sw – Yes Ma'am … But ek baat batao, tum mujhse gussa toh nahi ho

T – Nahi hun yaar tension mat lo … Ab chale

Sw – Haa chalo …

Precap:
Corridor
T-Hi, Main college ki GS, Taanya Rai Prakash
??-Hi, I'm Sharon Malhotra
Basketball Court
Sw-Dude mujhe yakin nahi ho raha hai kit u itne saalon baad india
??-Voh kya karu, best friend se itni der dur nahi reh sakta

Soo, this is the first chapter of That Second "Pehla Pyaar". I hope you guys liked the first chapter … Do like and give me your comments … Sorry If I forgot to pm some people … And If you want pm's please send me a buddy request … From next update onwards will send to those in buddy list … And thousands of apologies for the hugely late update!

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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Wow this was awsm...dun kill me fr this bt i like dis cute relation ship of swayam LOL great update luvd it ...w8ing fr TR meet 

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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Awesome update, aww Swayam way of saying sorry to Taani is too cute and love the boys and their friendship. I love it plz continue
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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 8:17am | IP Logged
awww swayam was so cute i luv it 
awsm nice per-cape thanks for PM 
n do it again kkk 
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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Nice concept want Taarey and Swaron to meet soon :) :)

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