Qubool Hai

SS - 'Pardafass' updtd pg 5 11/4

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Parde main rehene do
Parda Na Uthao
Parda Jo Uth gaya toh...
Raaz khul jayega

It is the most precious day 2day. The day which he always dream abt.
The day whn he and his life will become one. The day whn Asad and Zoya will consider as one soul and 2 bodies.
Today is his Nikah!
With the Life of his life, Zoya. A illmannered messy irresponsible gurl, whom he used to hate more dan anythng. But he Love her more dan everythng.
The ceremony z abt to start. Ammi, Tamatar are extremly happy. Deir, she is, jst opposite to him. In heavy green lehenga, covering her entire face. He wish he can see her once admire her epic beauty and kiss her chicks through his eyes...he wish... He cn...jst once
Moulvi started,
To Dulhan - "Kya Aapko Asad Ahemad Khan se Nikah Qubool hai?"
she whisper "Qubool hai"
Asad feel a bit curious, he cn sense the change in the voice. Bt his joy mk him ignore.
To Asad - "Kya apko inse Nikah Qubool hai?"
"Qubool..."
"Qubool Nahi Hai!!"
All turned towards entrance, 4m whr the voice come.
There a gurl is standing. She z breathing heavily, lyk she had to run a marathon!
"Humaira!!"
Humaira turned to see the person who call her name.
Suprisngly, its her so called mother, Razia Sidique. She hate her. After knowin wht she done to 'Zainab', she jst her, lyk lookin at her face is so far she dont even want to hear her name.
Throwing a hateful glance at her, she entered the mension.
Dillshad z still surprised by her announce. Bt she cm greet her,
"Humaira, aap aagayi. Acha hua ayiye. Avi bas..."
"Yeh kya tamasa chalraha hai yahan Phupi?"
"Tamasa!!?? Humaira yeh kya kehrahi ho tum?"
"Main wahi keh rahi hun Phupi, jo mujhe dikhraha hai. Aur Baji kahan par hain?"
"Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho beta" Razia try to interfare.
"Hum kya kehrahe hain hume achi taraha se pata hai. Aur aap dur rahi hai mujhse aur meri Baji se. Samjhi aap"
Dillshad try to speak her, "Humaira yeh tum kya keh rahi ho beta? Hume kuch samajh main nahi aaraha. Aaj Nikah hai Asad aur tumhare Baji ka..."
"Wahi toh main kehrahi hun phupi, aaj Nikah Asad Bhaijaan aur Meri Baji ke bich main hai toh yeh aurat meri baji ki jagah par kya kar rahi hai??"
Asad could nt stop him more. He remove his Sehera and come to the spot.
"Hosh main toh ho Humaira, kya bakwas kiye jaarahi ho"
"Hum koi bakwas nahi kar rahe hain bhaijaan. Meri baat toh..."
"Humaira aaj humara nikah hai. Aur woh tumhari baji hain"
"Woh meri baji nahi hai bhaijaan"
She went to dulhan drag her out side
"Meri baji ka naam Zoya Farooki hai..."
She remove her dupatta 4m her face
"...Tanveer Nahi!"
As per as she remove her dupatta, all r dumbstruck shocked.
Asad, Dilshad and Najma in same tym "Tanveer!!!"
"Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho aur Zoya kahan hai?"
"Han han bolo Tanveer kahan hai meri baji"
"Woh..woh Khala woh...woh...Zoya...Z...Zoya Bhag gayi!!"
"Kya??"
"Haan Jammy woh bhag gayi.. Maine usse rokne ki kosish ki par woh meri ek nahi suni.. Aur bhag gayi"
"Acha sach main Tannu. Sach main baji bhag gayi"
"H...haan. Aur kya hum jhut bolo rahe hain?"
"Thik hai, maanlete hain, ki woh apni marji se bhagi hai. Par tum yahan unki jagah kya kar rahi ho? Jab woh bhagi tumhe usi waqt aakar sabko bata dena chahiye tha"
"Ha...haan humne kosis ki thi. Par niche aake dekha ki sab bahut khus hain...aur ghar mehmano se bhara pada hai toh... Main nahi chahti thi ki Khala aur Jammy ki badnami ho..toh maine..."
"Toh tumne meri baji ki jagah lene ka faisla kar liye...bina kisiko puche...tumne soch v kaiseliya ke tum baji ki jagah le sakti ho"
"Hu...hum kyun esa karenge. Hume bas jammy ki fikar thi.. Aur kuch nahi. Aur wese v jise baji ke naam par tum itni dahade mar rahi ho na, uski toh tendency hai nikah se bhag ne ki. Bhag kar gayi hogi apne kisi ashiq ke pas.. Charecterless ladki..."
The vry nxt moment she only can feel her both cheeks are burning in pain. She can feel 2 vry hard slaps on her both cheeks.
Whn she raise her head, she only can see 4 red bloodshot eyes burning in anger.
Both Humaira and Asad slaped her!!
"Agar tumne apni gandi jubaan se ek aur behuda labs meri baji ke bare main kaha na toh main tumhe yahan Jinda gaad dungi..."
"...aur I swear main bhool jaunga ki tum meri dost ho..."

Toh kaisa hai yeh hai?
Comment and like jarur karna plz.
Kal puri raat jag kar dimag ka dahi bana kar ise likha hai. Toh mere pyare se nanhe se dimag ki thik hone ki kamna main ek line jarur likhna.. Tab tak main sone jaarahi hun...
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🤣 last part was hilarious...m just imagining the scene... Asad & humari slapping msk together... 😆
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