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muzzy_sk Goldie

Joined: 12 May 2012
Posts: 2061

Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Just read all the chaps and all of them were mind blowing! Just like all your works, this one too left me craving for more and more. Love howyour characters turn out. They have an awesome sense fo humour.
Aman's idea of the perfect date and Arnav's movie preferences of a 15 yr old old girl were too funny. Also like the track of Payal nd Aakash. Thanks for including their love story in this. You hardly read much of them in other works.
In short, loving your FF. Update soon and do Pm us. =)

-shreya and kanishtha.

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henamani IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 February 2012
Posts: 4381

Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:12am | IP Logged
i refuse to believe that this piece has been written by the author of tainted. take a bow. this one had me in stitches. to date i thought only khushi is adorable, but your arnav takes the cake man. beautiful. love it 

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--BumbleBee-- Goldie

Joined: 14 May 2012
Posts: 1227

Posted: 15 April 2013 at 8:19am | IP Logged
I love this story and where it is going.

Loving the conversations the characters have, with others and with themselves.

Loving Akash and Aman..

The story, the characters, the description.. It is simply awesome..

Couldn't stop laughing! Khushi, Arnav, Akash and Aman will be the death of me!

Please update soon..

Thanks for the PM..

Edited by --BumbleBee-- - 15 April 2013 at 8:19am

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shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 05 November 2009
Posts: 18949

Posted: 15 April 2013 at 8:24am | IP Logged
loved it... waiting for the date now..

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avantika_2012 Goldie

Joined: 16 March 2012
Posts: 1467

Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
I read the last three chapters in one go. It goes without saying that all of them were brilliant. 

Aakash karate chopped Arnav's hand coz he held Payal harshly. First I was shocked but then I couldn't stop laughing! LOL

"BURN HER AT THE STAKE" ROFL Gosh! He was really tongue tied and all he could manage was that! ROFL

Payal is super talented. I like that. 

Khushi and Arnav are INSANE. Absolutely insane. Nothing short of that! They actually started discussing A Walk to Remember! LOL

Aman and Aakash and all their dialogues. Oh my gosh! I just died laughing here. 

Your work is brilliant. Are you for real? LOL

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NestleToulouse IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 03 November 2011
Posts: 35110

Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Loved both the chapters! LOL

Thank you so much for the PM dear! Hug

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Bibliobibulus IF-Dazzler

Joined: 07 February 2012
Posts: 4496

Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Fantastic, upbeat chapter.. I really needed something cheerful today, and you delivered.. :) There were far too many great laments for me to pick favourites..  Brilliant balance of funny, sweet and just cheery.. Loved it all.. :)

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amv63 Senior Member

Joined: 24 April 2012
Posts: 302

Posted: 15 April 2013 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Rafa, I wish we could meet. Your wit seems as wacky as mine, although I could never articulate it as beautifully as you do. 
The dating conversation between the three men had me in splits. Nice to know that the sexy, suave, supposedly smooth operator Arnav Singh Raizada needs help from his brother and close friend on where to take Khushi on their first date. And he's so bloody obnoxious. I love it, although I don't blame Akash and Aman for wanting to strangle him despite the knowledge that "at his core he was a good man".
Arnav and Khushi are both trying to be blase about this whole 5-dates thingy but  each is actually going out of their way to ensure that everything's just perfect. Sweet.

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