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Reader_Hobby Goldie
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Hey!
 
Thanks for the PMs.
 
Hope you are doing well ...
 
Well-written. All the updates upto now Smile
 
Descriptive.
 
Khushi is quite amusing at times and so is Arnav.
 
In the first chapter he made out that he wasn't aware of what he did ... or how he may have offended Khushi ... tut-tut!
 
Vivi LOL ... I like her. She's quite a character. Bless.
 
Khushi ran away!!!! This cracked me up!!!! LOLLOLLOL
 
Aakash and Arnav's cameradie ... pretty funny. I say funny ... and I mean it in the positive sense.
 
Aman. Ahhh I look forward to seeing more of him ...
 
Arnav really seems to be into Khushi. She is one fire cracker. Confident. Has a great personality. Beautiful. Funny.

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Holy Molly, he is asking for advice!  He is smitten.  Or is he preparing something to get back at her? I will go out with Aman Mathur anyday - roller coasters, loud noises and candy floss.  Yes!  I love how he is sweating so much to make a lasting impression.  And Kushi?  It was so funny reading about how nervous she was!  I like the farting reference, that was hilarious.  These characters are so real and funny that I am addicted to this story.  I hope he keeps his mouth in check and she manages to walk properly in those heels.  Wherever they go, I hope it is private because fireworks are about to go off!  How evil to cut the update before they see each other?  Brilliant update though detailing their preparation for this date!  

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:56am | IP Logged
LOL...I just love u for writing this...
I am really enjoying and look forward to read it more...
Its just awesome dear...
Arnav-Khushi is one hell of a pair here...the craziest...
I am eager to read about their date...
Take care and...
Keep going...

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
that was excellent 
i really like your sense of humour


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Kishmish IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Dancing


Just loved Aman and Aakash's idea of the perfect date ... LOL

Oh am so looking forward to the date ... bring it on ... 
wonder what he has planned ... Wink
Both of them seem so nervous about it ... 



Edited by Kishmish - 14 April 2013 at 8:51am

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arshiyakanishka Senior Member
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Loving the story and the quick updates.

Was a little busy...so just read the last three chapters.

Good to see Arnav being tongue tied for a change on seeing Khushi.He proposed the condition of five dates with Khushi in lieu of Payal joining AR...awesome.

I absolutely love the weird but fun punishments Arnav comes up with for Aman...first doing sit ups...then singing Beyonce's songs to passerbys...and a possibility of singing Miley Cyrus's songs in the canteen...what next?LOL

Loved the banter between Arnav,Aman and Aakash.The way they ridiculed Arnav's choices regarding everything was hilarious.

Keep them coming Rafa...too much fun.

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:05am | IP Logged
woah...lovely update...a bit more descriptive in the start, but nonetheless entertaining...


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citi Senior Member
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
You have mastered the art of stopping just at 'that' point. But the frequency of the updates alleviates the somewhat impatient wait to read what happens next.LOL
Love the way his choice of movies is described y the other two. if he takes her home Mami and Anjali will be more than a handful and throw Khushi into the equation and one can wager a guaranteed surreality to the encounter.
Waiting to see what he does.

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