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arisai Goldie

Joined: 17 February 2012
Posts: 2327

Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:03am | IP Logged

Edited by arisai - 20 July 2013 at 12:29pm

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preethi28 Goldie

Joined: 24 April 2012
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Me first! Yayyy!
This update had me in splits.
Akash and Payal's ideas of a date are atleast acceptable .But Aman Mathur the guy for real? Shocked
Arnav trying to make this date perfect shows that he is in too deep.Akash and Aman's ideas were not bad but you never know with Khushi .Movie preferences of a 15 year old girl ROFL
Khushi is affected by Arnav too. Why else would SHE worry about doing something stupid and be so nervous.
The date is gonna be epic.I am damn sure of that.Afterall the guy who shouts " BURN HER AT THE STAKE" for no apparent reason in his office is taking the girl who "ACCUSED HIM OF ABANDONING HER AFTER FATHERING HER KID " for apparent reason on a date. LOL

Edited by preethi28 - 14 April 2013 at 7:43am

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mirka88 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 03 July 2009
Posts: 2561

Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:16am | IP Logged
I love how all your characters have a  highly developed sense of humour, as do you.

I love the dialogues they exchange.

Khushi's concerns regarding her date were very endearing and hit close to my own reservations. lol.

Payal's reference to 'BURN HER AT THE STAKE' was funny.

I'd actually like the Aman Mathur kind of date. But lets see how Arnav does it. ;)

I love your writing Rafa. Just can't get enough of it :)

Edited by mirka88 - 14 April 2013 at 7:24am

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neverbefore Goldie

Joined: 08 December 2011
Posts: 2283

Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Awww Man!!!! Why do you writers always break just at the wrong moment??!!! It's a rhetorical question. I know's just damn frustrating!! Tongue

I was so excited to see your update ... And you never disappoint. Love the brothership. Awesome chemistry between them. They could be lead characters in any Hollywood movie!!

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sonia_92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Pre date jitters, on both sides. Oh how ADORABLE *Sigh*

I cannot imagine a more mesmerizing setting for a date, akash and aman are bloody brilliant.


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DrNoureen Senior Member

Joined: 14 February 2012
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:31am | IP Logged
There was a time when I thought that Akash and Payal make the cutest couple, but I take my words back after reading this chapter LOL

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ayshaomar IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 May 2011
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Let the date(s) commence
i loved the real suggestions that Aman and Akaash gave Arnav about cooking her meal etc etc
Khushi bless her is a bag of nerves

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emistry IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 February 2012
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Another wonderful chapter! I love the banter between each character! Sounds like conversations I have had with my sibs and friends! I am looking forward to date #1!! also possible another interaction between di and mamiji!

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