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adev Senior Member
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Aww Payal and Aakash are incredibly adorable! And I'm glad Aakash has more to say in your story than the actual show. And Khushi and Arnav are such immature morons...they're also adorable lol

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
Just read all chapters and I was laughing
Khushi is so funny!
Pretending to be Payal and now getting caught

Can't wait to see how she gets out of this one 
Thanks for the 

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
This story is super cute. Loving it!  Want to read more now!

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
Woohooo!! another update :D
how cute are Payal and Akash!!! Lovvved how Akash made his bhai agree to whatever he wanted :D

Arnav is a lunatic :P getting a cat hahahahahaha
can't wait for the explosion thats gonna happen now Wink

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
Oh wow. Here i was thinking you hadn't updated and here i find that it was me who missed 3 chapters! 
Omg how cute were these three chapters! First the Khushi-pretending-to-be -Payal fiasco. Believe me i somehow had a gut feeling she'd do that after meeting the lady who probably came out of a dungeon-Arnav's aunt, no cookies for guessing. LOL
I loved Anjali's order to Arnav to marry her. Typical indian sister! ROFL
Khushi running away, Akash-Arnav's convos, so perfectly written. So witty! Loved it Big smile
Ooo i'm ze loving Akash-Payal bits here. Its so pleasant! Loved how you createed a contrast between Khushi and Payal and in your own way, between Arnav and Akaash!
Sooo finallyyy Khushi comes face to face Arnav! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon. I wanna see what new hell is introduced LOL

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
TOOO CUTE! 

payal and akash = pile of cuteness <3 you're so right, they're love story in the beginning of the show was adorable and then it went down the drain :( but im so glad ur including it in this story! :)

HAHA cannot wait to see Arnav and Khushi's encounter in the next chapter! :) I absolutely adore them and their wildness :P 

--Garima

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
Hahaha, I'm tots loving PayAsh!

They are most definitely the most adorable thing the show could have had, but they ruined it. In so glad you are going to fix that! :)

Also I LOVE this Akash! Like seriously! He has balls man!

And dude... Arnav is... Strange. Like... Seriously...

Khushi is well Khushi! LOL. Nothing out if place here! Lol. :)

I can't wait to see how this continues! :)

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Just read chapter 1...lurve it!! Am off to read the other chapters...

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