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arisai Goldie

Joined: 17 February 2012
Posts: 2327

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by enlightenme

This story is very hilarious and I love your Khushi, be it tainted or this. Was waiting for tainted to be updated, but this is good too. I'd accidentally come across this. What is GCSE PE teacher. Plz can you help.

Thanks :) 
Also, sure thing. GCSEs are the exams we do in the UK when we're 16. PE is Physical Education, one of the subjects you can choose to do a GCSE in. 

Edited by arisai - 11 April 2013 at 8:16am

Raila1014 Goldie

Joined: 05 February 2012
Posts: 1668

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Huge smile on my face as I take a break from work (iPad comes in handy sometimes).   I love where you are going with Payash, they got overlooked in the show because of the intense chemistry between the leads.  They could have become a strong parallel and contributed to the storyline.  I think I am loving this Akash as much as Arnav.  He is stronger and polite.  Poor Payal must wonder what she has just stepped into with the lunatic cat stroking man looking for another Payal who ruined his life.  And then tada, Kushi with her grand entrance n a red ball gown - boy he is going to be bowled over this time whether he likes desi or not!  Can't wait to read the next part.  Hope that cat does not rip her dress.  The Lavanya piece was awesome - made me think of Thing 1 and Thing 2 but a modern version of it.

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124555 Senior Member

Joined: 03 April 2012
Posts: 693

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged
awesome update...

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oKBSo IF-Rockerz

Joined: 19 June 2012
Posts: 5573

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:53am | IP Logged
ok arnav brought a cat to look domineering and powerful...that is so like stomach is aching...

and great karate by aakash...oh u got back ASRWink 

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--BumbleBee-- Goldie

Joined: 14 May 2012
Posts: 1227

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Loving Lavanya.

I wish the show went on with the same intensity it had in the beginning. I wish it hadn't been axed so suddenly.

But I'm glad the show happened. 

Reading your story is making me relive the initial days of IPK..

PayAsh are adorable.
ASR got a cat? LOL!!

Please update soon..
Can't wait to read more..

Thanks for the PM.

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varshapan Senior Member

Joined: 09 February 2012
Posts: 621

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged

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GirlOfFire Goldie

Joined: 20 June 2012
Posts: 1454

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:17am | IP Logged
definitely an Akash and Payal we could have seen in the show... if only.. sigh!

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enlightenme Senior Member

Joined: 26 January 2013
Posts: 340

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:26am | IP Logged
so, you liked the cute chemistry between Payal-Akash. It reminded of the 1960s &1970s Bollywood movies. But, they could have made it better, and utilized the potential of other actors. Instead of making it only Arnav-Khushi, that is the reason I enjoy reading your stories especially Tainted, where you don't have to give a damn to the audiences and TRPs, you do it because you love to write, and you are passionate about it. What comes from the heart touches the heart.

Arnav had bought that cat to look powerful and domineering, how filmy. I love this Akash 'the karate chop' and the 'dangerous glint' was as good as the cat claw'. Khushi is such a bitch couldn't she find a better name, any name other than her sister's, how foolish was that. 

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