AsYa OS : It's not home without you part 2 Pg 4 - Page 3

Loved it :) although some constructive critcism: i think instead if wacking her maybe he could give her the typical mad eyes and then smile?

Loved it :) although some constructive critcism: i think instead if wacking her maybe he could give her the typical mad eyes and then smile? Or be like. ms. Farooqui lol

this is just "oye hoye".. typically filmy full onmasala flick.. waiting to read more frm u.. :)🤗

Loved dis...plz cont nd pm me

Amazing!!! Totally loved it.

Wow, wonderful.

Where is your last update?

Nice OS... 👍🏼

Haaayyyeee!! Mein marjaawan!! This is sooo GREAT!! Oh my, i absolutely loved the end line, i wonder what Zoya's reaction would have been to that!! And the part, where she told him that he was taking her line and then he told her to shut up... it made me crack up, ha ha!! Thank you for this, it's FAB!! But why did you stop? x

Very nice and cute story. Love it. Please update next part soon

conti soon