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Mayur. Dil Nay Jisay Apna KaahaCH:22 (12/4) (Page 13)

gopi06 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
lovely updt fiza
so mayank declared his interest in nupur to SA
waiting for the next updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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-Anila- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Update Piiillliiizzz UnhappyUnhappyUnhappy

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parul_bansal Goldie

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 12:08am | IP Logged
replied after ages 
cont soon

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rimshazeb Goldie

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
aslamoalum apiiiBig smile 
after walking with you i so want u to write ff on arrange marriage n u fullfill my wishBig smileBig smileBig smile
i love starting n now mayank declared to SA  he want to marry nupur so this is going to more interesting.
update soon plz
bye.may ALLAH give u all which is good for u

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
hi guys
i haven't rplyied to any one of you.. as i was sick n was not online from past a week or more...
updates are delayed because of tht...

pls pardon errors

i m back but not in full strength

about once upon... its the wedding update so i will take sum days to update it ..

New readers welcum to my writings

Edited by drfizaahmed - 07 May 2013 at 1:25pm

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 1:22pm | IP Logged

Chapter: 3

NM: nupur mjh tum se kuch baat kerni hai….

Nupur: yeah is tareeqay se tu ap mjhy se koi khaufnak baat hi ker rahi hoti hain… kya baat hai….

NM: who shilpa k aj phone aya tha… unhony mayank k rishta diya hai  tumhary liyan

Nupur: KYA…..

She didn't expected that from him not at all , she thought he is descent person, but here he was thinking such about her…

Nupur: us se mein thoir baat kerli tu woh

NM: nupurr.. galat baat hai…. Us ny koi batmeezi nhi ki hai… us k liyan larkiya dekhi jarahi hai humain pata tha… aur bori kya hai…tameez se us ny ghar rishty hi behja hai…  ap se kis bhi kism ki koi bhi fasool baat ki usny… kafi acha larka hai

Nupur: mom…

NM: kab tak…. Nupur ek din apko apni zindagi mein agay bharna hai… is se acha moqa aur nhi aay ga…  aram se soch lo.. tum per koi zabardsti nhi hai… magar mjhy aur apky papa dono ko hi mayank buhat pasand hai….

It wasn't easy for nupur, after having a broken relationship, forming another is not tht so easy for her, its has sumhow taken away her believe about a firm relationship, she has her fears about destiny…  she has lost the feel tht if sumone says he want to stand beside he will.. seems like there is no guarantee to anything in life…. And than again going towards something like this..isnt easy for her… it isn't

Her mom is right mayank is  decent person and she wasn't angry on him, she was angry on herself… when did she didn't realize that she has been so much comfortable and friendly with him…

She even didn't realize herself…. He dosesnt make her uncomfortable .. he is a nice person…. But than till when she want to stand here.. before doing this for herself she wants to be sure that she can be reasonable to him.. plus he has all the right to know about her broken relationship, when few days back he told her about his one little problem… maybe thinking she has right to know about that… that actually doesn't mattered to her… she herself was surprised it wasn't a simple thing but it almost didn't mattered to her… knowing him abit she knew u can't take away the credit of being a nice person away from him on this.. and the way he was telling tht to her she can easily see.. he was sacred … worried.. tht day she thought maybe he is just being embarrassed about telling sumthing like tht to a stranger but today sumwhere she knew…  he was telling her evry bit so tht she can make a clear decisions but little he knew she is all messed…


It was morning and she was working with her mother in kitchen.. and was trying to make her words together to tell her wht she wants to.. she has been thinking about all this whole night…. And she just cant cum up to any decision

NM: kya baat hai nupur… koi baat hai beta….

Nupur: mom kya mayank ko .. samrat k..

NM: haan us ki khala ko mein ny phone per hi yeah baat bata di thi… aur unhony kaha tha k mjhy tu koi frak nhi perta ..magar  mein phir bhi ek baar mayank se baat ker lon…. Aur unhony dobara phone kiya tha yeah kahny k liyan k mayank ko koi msukil nhi is baat se k … khabi samrat tumahri ziandgi k hisa tha aur aj nhi hai….

Beta woh samjhdar insaan hai aur us ko is baat k andaza hai k sab k mazi mein khabi kuch asi baatein hoti hai jo bhool jana hi behatar hai….

Tum bhi bhool jao beta…. Kam se kam waha se agany bahrny ki khoshish kero… hazaro larkiyon ki mangi tooti hain ….

She nodded in yes taking in deep breath…

NM: tu kya mein un ko haan kah doon

Nupur: ap loog un k ghar bhi nhi ja ker dekhy gay

NM: apko lagtha hai hum apni ek hi beti asi hi day rahy hain unko… apk baba ny sari thaqikat( investigation) kera li hai us larky ki.. yaha tha k us ko Europe ki university mein bhi…

Hum un k ghar jay gay… aur agar sub thik laga tu unko haan khaday gay… thik hai…

Nupur: ji…

Pressing her hand on her head ..her mom went out to fix a meeting to mayank's house..

She took a deep breath realizing she has step forward towards sumthing new… and she is now feeling strange restlessness inside herself…. She is not at all sure of wht she is doing …  but she has just let it on her destiny.. let see where it takes her this time …


Mayank:  khala… kya hai… yeah ap itna kyun muskura rahi hoo…

He was getting irritated with the teasing glance from the evening his anty was passing to him… and now the smile was sumwhere not irritating because of the trease in it.. but the fact if there is any news why they aren't telling him… God knows how impatiently he is waiting to hear it…

He knew her parents has considered his proposal… his one of client told him that a person was asking about him and his character, and even his colleague in Europe told him that.. teasing him on the fact … why so much of investigations going on about u…

But wht they have concluded he didn't knew.. and here his anty is in all the mood of making him more restless

Shilpa: kya meray muskurany per pabandi hai kya…

Mayank: nhi koi pabanadi nhi hia.. per bilwajaha asay muskurana woh bhi is umer mein apko suite nhi kerta…

Shilpa: is umer se kya murad hai tumhara haan… aur janab mein bilawajaha nhi muskura rahi hoon…. Abhi thoir dair mein ap bhi muskuray ga

Mayank: aur woh kyun….

Ali: han ji tu kya baat hai bhi…. He said joining them

Mayank: khuda jany … apki biwi jab se sirf muskura rahi hain…

Shilpa: acha tu ab tu muskura …. Nupur k ami k phone aya tha…

She waited to make mayank's emotions cum on face, and he so hates it..he knew hiding them he is never an expert of specially when it sums to this woman .. but than one should never loss hope so he did tried

Mayank: tu..

And shilpa smiled,..

Shilpa: tu… tu yeah k woh kal ghar ana chah rahy hain….

Ali: aray wah yeah tu buhat achi baat hai bhi

Mayank: hain matlab

Shilpa: matlab yeah k jasay woh baat ker rahi thi… mehti k intezam ker layna chaiy…

She smile raising her eyebrows looking at him… and no matter what he was trying to hide his smile.. he wasn't to much able to

Shilpa: muskura lo… hum dono bulkily tumhari tang nhi khichny waly…

Mayank: khalaaa ap k kuch nhi hoskata ….. he went away from there knowing one thing staying here is injurious ….


It was a strange feeling of nervousness to sit infront of her parents… the scrutinizing way of there questions and each n evry move to be watched …

Shilpa: tu aj se phir Nupur humari hoi…

NM: bulkil…. Magar mayank ko humary pass ana paray ga…

He smiled and moved towards her and she spread her hand on his head…

Mayank: thank u…

It was a true thanku from his heart as sumwhere he never thought her parents might agree on this… he doesn't know the reason but yes he has a fear of rejection in all this…

Exchanging sweets and discussing the further procedures, adult were busy in all this almost making him left out.. with his thoughts…

Shilpa: haay ab tu buhat maza aay ga.. akhir meray betay ki shadi hai….

She hugged mayank and he smiled.. and hugged her back… true after his parents they both have never for a second let him felt they are not is parents… its never cross his mind ….

Shilpa: yeah lo…

Mayank: yeah kya hai…

Shilpa: nupur k no…she said mischievously 

Mayank: kya… khala ap ny ..

Shilpa: asi shakal maat banao jasay tum ko tu asa kuch kerna hi nhi tha samjhy…. Jao ash kero..

Mayank: wah khala … kahabi khabi mein sochta hoon.. apki jab mangi hoi hogi apny tu khudi hi Ali uncle se no. mang liya hoga.. buklay ap tu roz date per bhi jati hoongi

Ali: nhi humari kismet… us waqt mobile phone aur facebook nhi tha… tu yeah bomb direct shadi waly din hi phata

They both laughed

Shilpa: matlab kya hai apk… han han ap dono kerlay yeah sab.. anay dain meri bahu ko… mein bhi team banao gi

Ali: ap iraday thik nhi lagrahy hain bhi…. Bahu la rahi hai yaha humary gilaf jang ki taiyri..

Shilpa: bahu hi la rahi hoon.. taky asay jo akelay per jati hoon.. woh nah hoo…

Mayank: tension maat lo uncle… usko hum apni team mein kerlay ga…

Ali: acha… wasy shak tu mjhy is baat k hai k woh apki team pehly se hi moojod hai…

Mayank: ap befiakr rahy asi koi baat nhi hai…


Holding his cell he was thinking of pressing call button… he wants to call her thank her… for accepting him in her life.. and to tell her that he can understand her fears… when sumone at time of her life promised to hold her till eternity and left her in between

He knew it will require a bit more affords from his side to her to make her believe …. He isn't gona leave her in mid way…


Edited by drfizaahmed - 07 May 2013 at 1:28pm

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kheya-mayur IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
loved it
so mayur romance gona begin.WWU k mail romance k tarha ab phone romance.
m waiting eagerly.

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clustersofstar Goldie

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
Nice update

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