SwaRon OS- The yearning. - Page 3

firstly i don't know what to comment on this type of OS.. it was too emotional...i ain't type of emotional and sentimental girl to cry on write ups but this time i was about to cry.. seriously...if anyone will see my like this they will think i have a personality change disorder..lolz😆.. but this was really an awesome OS👏... full of emotions... i really felt for rishika...😭 but why swayam chose baby over Sharon...? their last conversation was written flawlessly... loved it to the core...😊 

love love love love love ittt.

This actually got tears in my eyes! :')
Sucha Beautiful OS. 

m hate sad ending yaar 😭😭

nice os

Sharon ko kyu maar daala?? :'(
Sad tha..!
But ofcourse you wrote it so well...i mean rishika and swayam's short journey since sharon's death was described in short instances which were appropriate and perfect.
Poor swayam couldn't do anything and his mind was in a state of shock...while sharon left.
It was surely sad but amazingly written :')

Originally posted by: aish_swaron

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This was such a sad OS

the flashback literally made me cry

but the OS, it was a marvelous piece of work. swayams feeling were depicted very well and not even at the slightest point i felt, it was overly done or anything that sort of. and the ghost-angels talk rishika, their daughter and swayam shared, it actually reminded me of a movie, Bhoothnath. bt it truly showed how good of a parent Swayam was.

basically the pain in this OS was expressed very well, and one could very well connect to it

keep writing more :)

just lobe last question

did u cry while writing this?

PS - The tittle is perfect! The Yearning - a perfect title

@Bold yup.. A bit. 😳

thT WAS A AWESOME AND QUITE HEART TOUCH OS... LOVED IT

Honestly I don't read such sad OS...

ouch ...😔
y did u kill sharon nt fair ...[:'(]
but amazin ...amazing
i wish she'd be back aftr all it was her swayam callin her ...😔
but it was awesum ...