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|*|VirIka OS: The last few moments... |*| (Page 7)

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Oh my god! Im sooo sorry for being sooo late! God..tyhis is a fantastic update yaar! Gosh..so emotional and painful. I cant believe I missed it CryCryCry But coming to the story,the line where you said VirIka became Viren and Jeevika was so damn painful CryCry Outstanding story.,..pl do continue writing! You are a  fab writer 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KryRan14

Wohooo i am first!Party
Let me have the victory dance first!Dancing
Lol but the credit for me being first goes to my ritz baby! Hug

I am really very sorry for unresing so late! Was stuck with classes and all! Unhappy

Coming to the story now!

This was way way beyond words! It leaves me dumbstruck each time i read it!
Aww the beginning was so sweet!
Viren kissing jeevika!  Their hug! Embarrassed Love blossomed! Blushing
Wohoo a b'day party for jeevs! hope i am invited!ROFL
How can she say no for he b'day party? Shocked She is so innocent! 

Loved the way you described the decorations and the way they had dressed up! It made me imagine the whole setup! brilliant!

Viren's care and pain seeing jeevika in that position! Jeevika struggling to take viren's name! Viren was so worried! I felt so bad for him! I was just wishing for jeevika to be fine when reading that part! 

Jeevika has a block in a artery! She has slim chances of survival! ShockedCry
I was feeling feeling so so bad for viren! Poor fellow! How i was jeevika would become fine! Cry
I was beyond shocked when the doctors came out and said its too late! CryCryCry

"The only place where she found safe in the whole world is Viren's arms.

" I Love You, Jeevika.. Please don't leave me."

" I Love You too Viren Ji.." Jeevika said. 

The hug was so passionate that Viren didn't even realise his life left the world.

" Jeevika! Jeevika! Jee.." He stammered as he saw Jeevika. There was a wide smile on Jeevika's face.

" J-E-E-V-I-K-A!!! " Viren shouted! He couldn't believe his eyes. He remembered the moment when Jeevika said she should die in his arms. His world seemed dark. He was shattered! He became so weak! He couldn't imagine a life without her. And she passed away on the same day as she was born."

Cry

I dont even have words to express how touched i am after reading this! She passed away!Shocked  
Viren! CryCryCry

Your story moved me to tears! I am speechless! I found it so difficult to express what i am feeling through words! Its probably touched me more because i know the back-story and what you took inspiration from for this OS! I know what you tried hinting on by this story! But this is not gonna happen with you! God will never do something so cruel! I wont let anything happen! Dare you even think about anything bad happening to you!

 I will never be able to do just to this story by my comment! How much ever i praise it is going to be less only! 
Beyond perfect!

Big and tight hug!Hug
I love you lots ritz baby! Heart


Awww! Thank you so much my Tanz baby! You are just so Awesome! :) Thank you for reading this first and approving it! You are just like me! LOL Hushh! You won't say anything about my health here! :P I demand! Lets see what God does with me.. Maybe something more serious than death? LOL I think I should better shut up now before I get scoldings from you. ROFL Anyways, Thank you so much Tanz baby! Hug I love you loads! Heart Thanks for your valuable comment:) 
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MADHU.BARUN

Oh my god! Im sooo sorry for being sooo late! God..tyhis is a fantastic update yaar! Gosh..so emotional and painful. I cant believe I missed it CryCryCry But coming to the story,the line where you said VirIka became Viren and Jeevika was so damn painful CryCry Outstanding story.,..pl do continue writing! You are a  fab writer 

Thank you so much Madhu! Hug
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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 11:01am | IP Logged
loved d os 
it was damn good
awesome 

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