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|*|VirIka OS: The last few moments... |*| (Page 6)

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niCeline

Originally posted by Dhoxi

Only few knows the real story, only few knows the truth behind this story. Only few can understand it. I wished I never read it before so that it wont let me cry like a hell right now

People only saw which was right in front them but not the main thing behind this story.

Each and everything was related to something, and you better know what i'm talking about right now.

That diseases, that date(birthday) everything just made me feel sad.

You know what i'm talking about. And yes i'm not commenting here just for a virika os :/

This is for you!!!!!

No matter what nothing is going to happen- keep that in mind.
God is not that cruel. I wish something happens to me rather than you. I wish i could die like RIGHT NOW.

Ily still no matter what goes by.

Your comment just made me so emotional. I know what, who you are talking about. Thank you for your support. And don't you ever say that you will die! God has given me the disease and not you. so, I should die! :| If you ever don't want me to say that I might die, then you should never say the word Die, ANYMORE!! Final!! I love you too Miss! You are just freaking awesome to me. You are just SUPERB! Love you forever and ever Aashima aka Shima Ji aka Principal Ji <3

In a heart beat, I will be there for you.. In a heart beat, we will reach the sky.. In a heart beat, we will always be there for each other.. <33

Love you loads.. no matter what comes between us. <3

I know you love this colour so thought to write in this colour too LOL
Thank you for making me cry again ROFL I should sit with a tissue now LOL

I love you Heart 

And lets both stop using the work DIE now LOLps lets share your disease with me as well *puppy face* Tongue

we have to show world how awesome we are Cool in spamming, isn't it? 

Nothing gonna come in between us Wink we will keep no-entry board so that no one can enter ROFL

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Preetha!

My Gosh! You write something?? And that too well??
I am so happy!:D Well, this was an Awesome one! Even though you wrote about Viren and Jeevika, I know who is all this about! Heart I am not gonna write more as I am total speechless! But, really a splendid job, Preetha. Do keep up the work!:D Love loads.


Edited by Jahnvih - 13 April 2013 at 5:38am

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jahnvih

Preetha!

My Gosh! You write something?? And that too well??
I am so happy!:D Well, this was an Awesome one! Even though you wrote about Viren and Jeevika, I know who is all this about! Heart I am not gonna write more as I am total speechless! But, really a splendid job, Preetha. Do keep up the work!:D Love loads.

Thanks Angel! Heart I love you!
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kays94

reserved!

***unres***

Sorry for the late comment!
Got to say Preetha, this was beyong beautiful Heart 
Everything about this just gave me goosebumps and now this is saved on my phone!
It was the touchiest story I have read, and literally send shivers down my spine...
The way you handled the concept and the story twisting it
just hats off to you
Clap Clap Clap
This was very very beautiful and everything was written perfectly!
The way you described our beautiful couple really just made me imagine and picture everything!
I wish you would write more because you are a flawless writer and wayyy better than me!!!
Thanks and sorry Heart 

Awww! Thanks the Bestest writer! <3 You are the Bestest write and no fights in it! Just agree to it! LOL I was really waiting for your comment! I really wanted to know what you thought of it. I am super happy to have known that you loved the story. Thank you so much! Heart And sorry? No sorry in friendship! :) x Thank you for the appreciation once again! Big smile
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dhoxi

Originally posted by niCeline

Originally posted by Dhoxi

Only few knows the real story, only few knows the truth behind this story. Only few can understand it. I wished I never read it before so that it wont let me cry like a hell right now

People only saw which was right in front them but not the main thing behind this story.

Each and everything was related to something, and you better know what i'm talking about right now.

That diseases, that date(birthday) everything just made me feel sad.

You know what i'm talking about. And yes i'm not commenting here just for a virika os :/

This is for you!!!!!

No matter what nothing is going to happen- keep that in mind.
God is not that cruel. I wish something happens to me rather than you. I wish i could die like RIGHT NOW.

Ily still no matter what goes by.

Your comment just made me so emotional. I know what, who you are talking about. Thank you for your support. And don't you ever say that you will die! God has given me the disease and not you. so, I should die! :| If you ever don't want me to say that I might die, then you should never say the word Die, ANYMORE!! Final!! I love you too Miss! You are just freaking awesome to me. You are just SUPERB! Love you forever and ever Aashima aka Shima Ji aka Principal Ji <3

In a heart beat, I will be there for you.. In a heart beat, we will reach the sky.. In a heart beat, we will always be there for each other.. <33

Love you loads.. no matter what comes between us. <3

I know you love this colour so thought to write in this colour too LOL
Thank you for making me cry again ROFL I should sit with a tissue now LOL

I love you Heart 

And lets both stop using the work DIE now LOLps lets share your disease with me as well *puppy face* Tongue

we have to show world how awesome we are Cool in spamming, isn't it? 

Nothing gonna come in between us Wink we will keep no-entry board so that no one can enter ROFL


LOL Purple just rox! :P
I should sit with a tissue! LOL 
Share my disease??ROFL Cannot! The god only wants me to have it!
ROFL Spamming?? Nooo! Oh please! Don't you dare spam my scrapbook! ROFL
Can! No-entry board will be awesome!
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Oh my god! Im sooo sorry for being sooo late! God..tyhis is a fantastic update yaar! Gosh..so emotional and painful. I cant believe I missed it CryCryCry But coming to the story,the line where you said VirIka became Viren and Jeevika was so damn painful CryCry Outstanding story.,..pl do continue writing! You are a  fab writer 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KryRan14

Wohooo i am first!Party
Let me have the victory dance first!Dancing
Lol but the credit for me being first goes to my ritz baby! Hug

I am really very sorry for unresing so late! Was stuck with classes and all! Unhappy

Coming to the story now!

This was way way beyond words! It leaves me dumbstruck each time i read it!
Aww the beginning was so sweet!
Viren kissing jeevika!  Their hug! Embarrassed Love blossomed! Blushing
Wohoo a b'day party for jeevs! hope i am invited!ROFL
How can she say no for he b'day party? Shocked She is so innocent! 

Loved the way you described the decorations and the way they had dressed up! It made me imagine the whole setup! brilliant!

Viren's care and pain seeing jeevika in that position! Jeevika struggling to take viren's name! Viren was so worried! I felt so bad for him! I was just wishing for jeevika to be fine when reading that part! 

Jeevika has a block in a artery! She has slim chances of survival! ShockedCry
I was feeling feeling so so bad for viren! Poor fellow! How i was jeevika would become fine! Cry
I was beyond shocked when the doctors came out and said its too late! CryCryCry

"The only place where she found safe in the whole world is Viren's arms.

" I Love You, Jeevika.. Please don't leave me."

" I Love You too Viren Ji.." Jeevika said. 

The hug was so passionate that Viren didn't even realise his life left the world.

" Jeevika! Jeevika! Jee.." He stammered as he saw Jeevika. There was a wide smile on Jeevika's face.

" J-E-E-V-I-K-A!!! " Viren shouted! He couldn't believe his eyes. He remembered the moment when Jeevika said she should die in his arms. His world seemed dark. He was shattered! He became so weak! He couldn't imagine a life without her. And she passed away on the same day as she was born."

Cry

I dont even have words to express how touched i am after reading this! She passed away!Shocked  
Viren! CryCryCry

Your story moved me to tears! I am speechless! I found it so difficult to express what i am feeling through words! Its probably touched me more because i know the back-story and what you took inspiration from for this OS! I know what you tried hinting on by this story! But this is not gonna happen with you! God will never do something so cruel! I wont let anything happen! Dare you even think about anything bad happening to you!

 I will never be able to do just to this story by my comment! How much ever i praise it is going to be less only! 
Beyond perfect!

Big and tight hug!Hug
I love you lots ritz baby! Heart


Awww! Thank you so much my Tanz baby! You are just so Awesome! :) Thank you for reading this first and approving it! You are just like me! LOL Hushh! You won't say anything about my health here! :P I demand! Lets see what God does with me.. Maybe something more serious than death? LOL I think I should better shut up now before I get scoldings from you. ROFL Anyways, Thank you so much Tanz baby! Hug I love you loads! Heart Thanks for your valuable comment:) 
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MADHU.BARUN

Oh my god! Im sooo sorry for being sooo late! God..tyhis is a fantastic update yaar! Gosh..so emotional and painful. I cant believe I missed it CryCryCry But coming to the story,the line where you said VirIka became Viren and Jeevika was so damn painful CryCry Outstanding story.,..pl do continue writing! You are a  fab writer 

Thank you so much Madhu! Hug

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