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Posted: 11 years ago
Only few knows the real story, only few knows the truth behind this story. Only few can understand it. I wished I never read it before so that it wont let me cry like a hell right now

People only saw which was right in front them but not the main thing behind this story.

Each and everything was related to something, and you better know what i'm talking about right now.

That diseases, that date(birthday) everything just made me feel sad.

You know what i'm talking about. And yes i'm not commenting here just for a virika os :/

This is for you!!!!!

No matter what nothing is going to happen- keep that in mind.
God is not that cruel. I wish something happens to me rather than you. I wish i could die like RIGHT NOW.

Ily still no matter what goes by. Edited by Dhoxi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg this story legit made me cry at the end, it was just so powerful!! but i cant every imagine Viren without Jeevika, but this was amazing, sad but really good! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
love the story to the core  
preetha di u made me cry
amazing story di๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 11 years ago
#res
An update by you preetz aha ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww
dis was fab
it was heart touching n so emotional u wrote it so well๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
i m speechless..๐Ÿ‘
i luved it... 
woww awesome yr...gr8 work๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a heart-touching OS๐Ÿ‘
Emotions beautifully portrayed...
The feeling of loosing ur loved ones- Loneliness,Helplessness,Desperation, Love! I was able to see the mixture of all these elements in ur story๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh so sad
I was happy in the beginning but ltr had tears in my eyes when I knew jeevika was not well
So sad of viren
Superb thought
Awesome 
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Posted: 11 years ago

A mind blowing OS, and its ur first time writing?? dude ur absolutely sooo good..u should write more..i enjoyed reading the whole thing..Gosh it was a sad one though...how could u kill Virens Jeevika??lol i had tears in my eyes :( loved every bit of it..please do write more stories..looking forward, and thanks for writing this OS and shring it with us :) Awesome Job!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing! Superbly written!
The emotions were wonderfully expressed!
Heart touching story!
Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hugss to u buddyyy...u just made me cryyy like maddd... wt an updatee...realyyy awesomee and a new story in this forum... truelyyy emotional n sadddening updateee... 


but u did an awesomee job... great writingg..u got a reallyy good talenttt... keep continuinnn n pm me..wen u update any virika storiesss!!!!    \

lookin forward for ur updatesss