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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 97)

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
beautiful writing Thumbs Up
excellent Thumbs Up

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
updated the comment 

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:02pm | IP Logged
Wat would hav happened 15 yrs ago...tht Arnav Blamed Khushi even though she was innocent nd it wasn't her fault at all...why does he wanna make amends!!!!

your slowly bringin out the past...m so eager to knw wat would happened...m really glad tht your updatin on time...thanks Smile

its a wonderful chapterClap...Khushi waited for him all those years...amazing...my heart goes out to her...m glad Arnav is seein how much he still means to her Embarrassed

the bandage scene ClapClap awesome especially this line


"Who needed bullets, if you had stabbing words like these?" Star

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Awesome and emotional update...
 
The scene of Khushi bandaging Arnav's wound was touching...words are like arrows...once u leave an arrow it cannot be taken back same with words...Both Arnav and Khushi hurting each other with harsh words...
 
Wonder what exactly happened in the past...why did Arnav blame khushi...It looks like khushi was the victim then why did Arnav keep mum...
 
The FB was very sweet...
 
Hoping RK keeps away from khushi...donot want her to suffer more...
 
Update soon...


Edited by musicfan5 - 22 April 2013 at 8:26pm

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:30pm | IP Logged
I'm reading this like I read all great stories where there is some heartache...with one eye closed yet unable to look away because the writing is that good!

What did happen to Khushi all those years ago?Cry

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
Hey dear, I am so glad that you are back to writing. I still love the Arnav in your last story the most, the kick boxer, sharp shooter and a very loving partner. It is one of my fav story and I have read it 3 times and the epilogue uncountable times... The best part of your writing style is all your unexpected surprises you throw on us and very unpredictable story line. Coming back to this one, read all chapters in one go and I am all ears & eyes to read more & more. Loving the storyline, all chapters were very well written and simply amazing... I am totally hooked to it. Thank you once again for writing this Smile

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Today is Monday ... Dancing

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
I knew something very wrong had happened to Khushi in the past, and I know how much both Arnav and Khushi suffered due to this incident

RK is still a bad guy for me.
But he does seem like a calculative person.

Waiting for the next update.

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