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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 94)

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:56am | IP Logged
finally read d full updat ...:-) Dat ranvijay is so cheap :-( :-( Yet cherished d fact dat he knws dere smthng btwn annyaw and khushi ...:-) :-)

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 5:04am | IP Logged
good that Arnav will atleast be kind towards Khushi and not hurt her... hope Vij brings AK together..

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 5:52am | IP Logged
loved the part...

arnav started realize tht he may be trying to forget her but for khushi she is the one and only best friend...whtever he thought abt his dadi doings was actually her thoughts...tht was really soo emotional and touchy...

just fantastic update...

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Awesome update...Clap
I am scared to know what might have happened with Khushi in the childhood...
Heart wrenching...
Church confession was beautiful...
Anjali was overtly rude...I have got a hunch of RK's behavior now...was really wondering why he would be behaving like that in front of Arnav when he should show his best behavior...Its clear in this update with your help...
Loved it...
Keep going...

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
That was a nice update... Arnav doesnt know what to say and regrets his actions later...To be honest,I really don't wanna know what happened with khushi 15 years ago. You have portrayed her character with such an innocence  it is impossible to think what she might have gone through.. keep updating
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:09am | IP Logged
 Great update!
i liked the church part...so arnav's  now on his way to make amends...
thhe lil sneek peak to the past gave me a very disturbing hint and i just hope im wrong...
dont tell me the poor kid got raped wen she was 10 Shocked!!!!!
will be waiting for wed!

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:46am | IP Logged
amazing update
lots and lots of things happened

The FB was cute, the reason as to how Arnav got called Annyavv

Arnav (present time) pretended to not remember anything of the past yet his slip of tongues and actions prove otherwise..Khushi wanting to help him but then beign hesistant as she doesn't see her best friend in him anymore, he's her master and she is a servant so she can't act like how she did 15 years ago..what Arnav said to her was mean and he saw how it hurt her aswell as her response hurt him..he finally found out the power words can affect someone (for the worst)

what happened THAT day, 15 years ago, has seem to add some direction like she was forced/abused etc but we will see once the story gets to reveal that part..and i do wonder what force that the Raizada in him made him not help Khushi who he wanted too..its funny as he knows she is the victim yet he is treating her like the offender

wonder how he reacts to what the priest said, will he try to make amends for his mistakes? and Ranvijay seems to see something that everyone has missed, but no one has seen Arnav and Khushi together properly to see anything else

it is extremely sweet how Khushi preserved his books and other belongings of his, how she never used it even after being told, how she bought it back and rearranged his room for his arrival, how the photos on the wall were her suggestions

Khushi has an amazing spirit, she maybe hurt by the words and actions but she still goes on - love it


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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:53am | IP Logged
Nice update! Is RK going to cause more problems?

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