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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 93)

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Wonderful update..

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:05am | IP Logged

Beautiful update.

So Khushi was indeed abused/molested as a kid.Ouch After I read chapter 5, I had a feeling that Khushi may not recall the incident but this update got me thinking again. Does she remember but somehow blames herself for what happened? Did the fact Arnav held her responsible shaped her beliefs that way? 

This particular sentence...To repent for things he should have done as a best friend but couldn't do because he was a Raizada...and your note gives me the impression that it was someone from the Raizada family.

Once again, the childhood memories were beautiful...and Khushi preserved all his books...awww. 

Vivian as RK...now I am Imagining Deepali from MB as Anjali. LOL Since this Anjali is younger and a little snooty and bratty, I can't imagine Daljeet. 

Thanks for letting Barun and Sanaya be the faces for Arnav and Khushi. EmbarrassedLOL

 

 



Edited by incandescent - 21 April 2013 at 4:23am

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:10am | IP Logged
i am sorry i took this long to come check out your story.
and as usual, i am blown away by the depth of each character, even the supporting cast.
buaji and her say in khushi's education.. wow.

and yes, only a stranger can see the crackling air  between the two leads, and vivian is a bang-on fit for your RK.

NNM.. nah, i will go with BSEmbarrassed


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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:23am | IP Logged

Nice Update!

Anjali's fiancee is creepy and weird.
worried for Khushi:(
Eager to see whats next .

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
supercool update

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
awesome update..
continue soon..

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Loved the update. The arhi part, the talk with the priest, loved it. Wonder whats RK upto

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Dread thinking of what happened to Khushi, something so traumatising that she seems to have completely blocked it out, and on top of that the one person who was always with her appears to have completely forgotten about her. Step up Arnav, it's going to be damn hard but am sure he has it in him to stick with her from now on. Great update Clap thank you so much. Looking forward to Wednesday

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