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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 92)

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Hey! i just came across your FF. Mirage i have read...it was awesome...but i get to catch up with this FF while it's ongoing...This one too is awesome...i have no words to describe...i loved it all...your stories just so different n realSmile...i would followup with this one...thanks for giving us such wonderful story...

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:30am | IP Logged
just loved every bit of it! I can imagine what would have happened to khushi in her childhood days.. Arnav didn't support her when she needed him the most! khushi is still stuck in her childhood days I think bcos of which she is remembering every single thing she and her best friend did in their childhood days. The way she wanted to preserve all of arnav's books under the impression that he will return soon shows how much she expected him to return and loved him in spite of arnav not protecting her at that time. this makes me feel how much depressed khushi would have been when arnav said he doesn't remember her Cry I just feel very bad for khushi. I hope arnav observes khushi and does things to make her happy. I just want her to smile happily and be happy.. I guess Ranvijay is gonna be the cupidwa?? LOL hope, he does something good in b/w arhi. 
p.s: for me, arnav means barun, khushi means sanaya. Even if you write with someone else playing these characters, I just can't erase the notion of Sarun as Arhi. Every emotion, every word I read, I imagine those scenes with Sarun playing Arhi characters and rejoice their chemistry in mind Smile
p.p.s: Thanks for such an awesome update and such a touchy story! 

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
okay. the starting wala scene was nice. n intense man.Thumbs Up
gosh he sometimes says things that he shouldn't. stupid man.Angry
n khushi's behaviour is also scaring me to bits.
so the incident was way more than what RK did...Ouch

finally a +ve change coming in him. so he's gonna make amends ri8. so why not start from making her call him Annyav again.Embarrassed
uh-oh his mother's revelations 'bout his ol' stuff was such an awww moment.Day Dreaming
okay so is this RK gonna help arshi somehow??????Shocked

n hey there's no aman in ur story. i miss him...Embarrassed

just wanted to tell u that im falling in luv with ur banner again n again. Big smile
the two kids are shooo shweeet. Heart

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Finally the story is unfolding.

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged
That was amazing!  Flashback was so cute. 

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yush-swt Senior Member
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged
wow...that was a powerful chapter...from the part of khushis and arnavs conversation to the priests advice on destiny to mum explaining about love...it had every emotion...
i feel sorry for khuhsi she must have really been broken due to arnavs words...she had such anticipation...hope the past clears up...
so RK hmm still no idea about  him...but lets give him a chance to be a good guy...hopefully anjalis choice to be better...whatever he has realised the attraction...and the onlly one, but i guess dadi has an idea too...
loved the update...

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Loved the update. Smile

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:46am | IP Logged
awww...amazing update... Tongue

first part shows how much khushi cares for him...his family...

but the 15years gap made them formal..poor girl...

i love the way priest spoke...hop his words wil guide him...

mother child conversation was beautiful...

khushiz past is haunting me...
latest delhi incident scares me...i am hopless bt humanity...

waiting for next update . ...

i love dis barun-sanaya-rk trio... Tongue

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