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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 85)

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 1:44am | IP Logged
I just read this story in one go and I love it!

I find myself tearing up a few times while reading this FF, I feel sad for the loss of friendship between the two. I feel sad for Arnav's behavior and his distance from his family and and I feel sad that Khushi's dream of her best friend returning to her has shattered

Your writing is great! I can picture everything so clearly in my mind, I also admire the Anglo aspect you have added in! I have a feeling RK is going to do something which will strikingly resemble what happened 15 years ago and this time Arnav is going to do what he couldn't do 15 years ago

Edited by sweet_5 - 21 April 2013 at 1:44am

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 1:45am | IP Logged
I am speechless , just wana say epic update , but some q are bothering me , why Khushi talk to arnav like that , why she wana show him that whatever happend , is not important or effecting her , why she said that rk was not misbehaving with her , why she didn't say thanku to Arnav , I don't understand her behaviour in that scene , ur a gifted talented writter , no doubt about it , and Iam impationtely waiting for wed

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Cant wait for next one ...
and pls pm me ...pls pls pls 

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 1:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samirao

I am speechless , just wana say epic update , but some q are bothering me , why Khushi talk to arnav like that , why she wana show him that whatever happend , is not important or effecting her , why she said that rk was not misbehaving with her , why she didn't say thanku to Arnav , I don't understand her behaviour in that scene , ur a gifted talented writter , no doubt about it , and Iam impationtely waiting for wed

Like I said before, Arnav was not the only one who was traumatised with that one day. Khushi's trauma is so severe, the extent of which will only be shown at the climax. All her behaviour will be explained later and if you feel sad for her now at this stage, you will cry for her when her whole story is revealed.Until then, you will keep questioning her behaviour.
And if Arnav has changed in these past fifteen years, Khushi has been stuck in her childhood. 

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Hey.. Just came across this FF few days back.. I was caught by the interesting title... Amazing talent you have dear.. Loved the way you portray Khushi and Arnav's feelings.. Its almost like happening around us..very natural...  The way you depicted Mussorie is a real treat...
 
Nice story plot and loved your work.

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Awesome update.
Loved the church scene. Arnav is not an atheist here. 
Quite a refreshing change to the usual ones. 
And i like the line, " Who needed bullets, if you had stabbing words like these? " It showed pain and agony.Ouch

And the guilt is consuming him. Plus, it was a Raizada who had done the evil to Khushi then. But who was it? 

And RK. Yes i don't really like him or his character much in the show. 
Trying too hard to be like ASR actually. 
But yeah, i guess i can see him in a new light through your FF. 
And i am surprised that he managed to figure out there is something btwn ArHi. 

Thank you for the prompt updates ! Big smile

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 2:08am | IP Logged
oh...we are getting itsy bitsy insights into that one horrible insident...and some very beautiful snippets of a lovely childhood...but it pains me to see them so distant...
and quite happy to see that he is developing more interest in her...and yes , thnk u for making rk not trecherous, :)
waiting for wed now...

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by samirao

I am speechless , just wana say epic update , but some q are bothering me , why Khushi talk to arnav like that , why she wana show him that whatever happend , is not important or effecting her , why she said that rk was not misbehaving with her , why she didn't say thanku to Arnav , I don't understand her behaviour in that scene , ur a gifted talented writter , no doubt about it , and Iam impationtely waiting for wed

Like I said before, Arnav was not the only one who was traumatised with that one day. Khushi's trauma is so severe, the extent of which will only be shown at the climax. All her behaviour will be explained later and if you feel sad for her now at this stage, you will cry for her when her whole story is revealed.Until then, you will keep questioning her behaviour.
And if Arnav has changed in these past fifteen years, Khushi has been stuck in her childhood. 

oh la la you're confusing me !! ConfusedConfused
I don't understand anything !
But I'd better wait Wink


btw I've unressed Big smile


Edited by Agathe - 21 April 2013 at 2:12am

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