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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 85)

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysterious_maze

sorry i double posted Embarrassed
Day Dreaming

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:21am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 6:21am | IP Logged
I find this very interesting, I did read Mirage, but long after you had finished it. One of the best stories I ever read. this one is really special. And I don't mean to offend, but after reading this chapter, I'm getting The Kite Runner vibes from this. So I guess Khushi was molested as a child while Arnav was around, and he didn't speak up then, causing the reaction this time around. Arrey yaar, bechari Anjali ki kismat hamesha kharaab hoti hai- another creep. Ugh. How could he say that in front of Arnav? His prospective brother-in-law. Disgusting lowlife.
I can imagine Sanaya as Khushi. As for Arnav, let's just assume that the five-eighths Indian shows more than the Brit part, so Barun can still be him. Dadi- good choice, I love Maggie Smith. Hmm, would the actor you're referring to be Hrithik Roshan?

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysterious_maze

Originally posted by Agathe

Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by Agathe

LOL I've read all updates once again ROFLROFL

How am I going to survive till Sunday ?? CryCry
 
I so want to know more about RK !! He intrigues me !!
He seems to be a manipulative man ErmmErmm
 
Btw, is Mami going to have an important role ?? You described her more than others characters ! And in my opinion you enhanced her a bit more than other characters !
 
Just a thought Wink
 
Waiting ...
 
 



Like I said before, the side characters aren't that important in this FF. I know, I know you like side characters.LOL But characters like RK, Mami, Dadi are important but only at certain stages. They won't be concentrated upon, but they will play their tiny bits in Arhi story. And yes, Mami will be important at the end. Not now.

Then I'll wait quietly LOLLOL

@ Bold LOLLOL
Not my fault, when we used to play at school : my friends always took the lead roles and I was always left with side roles since I appreciate side characters LOLLOL

Thanks God you got that side roles and not some one who used to stand in background without a dialogue otherwise you happened to like descriptions and scenes in the story more than anything else LOL

LOLLOLLOL
But you know I like descriptions a lot as well LOLLOL
Molten gives wonderful description especially feeling and sets  WinkWink
Reading her updates, it's very easy to picture what happens WinkWink

That's why I like her stories Big smileBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:44am | IP Logged
nice one...

is this Vij fellow hav negative shade???

gr8 update anyways...

i feel bad for khushi when she keep on calling them MEMSAAB and CHOTESAAB...or when she listen and smile silently standing in a corner when the whole raizada enjoy their family time...

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged
this is a very interesting FF... just read all the five parts together.

so you changed shyam with ranvijay... but otherwise the entire story is different and really good.

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 10:28am | IP Logged
tomorrow is sunday!!!
yay!!!!

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:15am | IP Logged
just came across this ff..its awesome...pls continue soon..Smile

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