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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 78)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:05am | IP Logged
awesome update!! Wow so Anjali's fiance is a jerk. I knew something would be weird with him. Poor Anjali! Wow Arnav really got angry! I can't believe he reacted like that so openly. He is obviously very possessive about Khushi. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:09am | IP Logged
uh-oh this RK will someday get a tight punch from arnav.LOL
poor khushi.. the scene in anjali's bedroom n her dialogue was very stressing.Unhappy
she must really be trampled in true sense.Cry

n now this RK.Angry
ASR's reaction was suuuperb.Approve
his father dint had any prolblem in arnav staring at khushi in the lawn but his mother's reaction to him holding her hand was different.Ouch
maybe she has a role in  khushi's bad past.

coming to ur note...
if i would've to imagine arshi as someone else then i wont be reading ur ff dear.Embarrassed
for me arshi is sarun n sarun is arshi.Heart

n just a guess... is the actor u think resembes ur description, neil nitin mukesh???????

n next chapter on sunday.yayyy only 2 days left.Dancing


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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Anjali's fiancee is so arrogant to say those words in front of his to be soon brother in law...hope he doesn't harm Khushi in anyway.

You really are a brilliant writer, I'm glad you are back!

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Wonderful update Smile

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Their childhood flashbacks are just too adorable, how do you even come with these things?! Arnav seems to be in a trance when ever it comes to khushi be it reminiscing sweet memories of  been kids or adults who are trying to act nonchalant. It's lovely the way you have explained Khushi's yearnings from Arnav's point of view even though he is trying to act as a stranger he doesn't seems to miss anything that her eyes are conveying.

RK's introduction wasn't too appealing but just by based on this incident don't want to make any hasty conclusions about him. Who knows he might turn out be the cupid in disguise Smile  and Arnav's out burst seems like a result of all the emotions he has been trying to burry for the past 15 years so he took the first opportunity to vent his frustration out. Totally addicted to the story, love the way you are presenting everything, waiting for the next updateSmile

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Amazing and Brilliant update, i love the flashbacks you show regarding Arnav and Khushi's childhood days they are so cute and adorable. The part with Anjali, khushi and Arnav being in the same room was so nice, it reminded Arnav of three kids playing like the did in there childhoods days. So Arnav finally met his Brother in law and straight away knew something was not right about the guy and thought he was arrogant and he was proven right when he tried his perverted ways with khushi, i cant believe the way he spoke to khushi in front of Arnav. Poor khushi because of the past incident just went numb and Arnav finally spoke up on her behalf and stood up for her, which he may not have been able to do in the past. Please continue soon xx

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:37am | IP Logged
awsumm n different concept 
their child hood memorise so cute...
what happend in past is something near to the scene which happend in last update...??/
ajnalii fiance is total jerkDead
he didnt care that he is sitting with his to be brothr in law n flirting ewwwAngry
continue soon
 
 

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Loved the chapter! 
So Arnav is getting more observant? Wink
And i kind of wanted this reaction from him. Because he is already upset and guilty that he didn't protect her that day. 
So from the hints, is RK going to be okay in the later chapters? 
And i loved the memory on the plants. And the smile he couldn't control. 
Plus, the hints said that Khushi was taken advantage of because she was of the lower class.
Sigh, i can't begin to think of her situation. Its so unfair to them. 

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