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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 73)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged
i loved his outburst..and the update was lovely..the childhood stories are so cute yaar

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Hi I am first time commenting on your story.

That's because your first story mirage I read just few month back and I am really blown out after that.

When I come to know that you have come back with new story I can't stop my self and read all parts till now in one go.
I have been to that part of india and I could feel the beauty of that place in your story.
I could visualise all the scene in front of me happening at that time.

I am imagining the character of arnav and Khushi of IPK and keeping in mind them only I can say that you have portrait those characteristic very well.

I like your grip on the story, not jumping on the next part but keeping it in its pace.

I could feel the fresh air and cold of the mountains in this as I know how beautiful is that part of india.

I am Lucky that I came across your writing and read it.

Thanks for the beautiful stories.

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged
i just read chapter four now...sorry for the late reply...i was out of town

Amazing chapter once agn ClapStarClap every word has been written with so much love...especially their past...

really loved their childhoodHeartHeart...so much innocence...nd i am with khushi here...the way u said...wish money/status din't discriminate us...fabulously said ClapClap

he chose a room only so tht he could see her...or she could call out to him whn in need...thts really specialBig smile...nd the way u hav told...


"she had just been crowned as the Queen of her entire universe" - i really couldn stop smilin here Big smile...nd now thinkin abt tht...she's upset Unhappy i so want her to hav tht joy back Stern Smile

Arnav nd Dadi scene was nice...they share a nice bonding...arnav without any hesitation just told her abt lavanya...their conversation was good nd mature nd to the point...wonderfulClap...Dadi is really special to Arnav Smile

nd i lik wat u hav chosen "
This is an attempt from me to portray love in a completely different angle. So the story will be subtle. " Thumbs Up

aww so the past will be revealed only at the climax...sounds damn interestin though...
nd for me Arnav nd Khushi will be Barun nd Sanaya Smile

off to read chapter 5



Edited by supriya.arshi - 18 April 2013 at 4:50am

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
FIRST OF ALL WELCOME BACK.. MISS YOU MUCH
today i saw you are posting ff .. so start reading it.. its always treat to read your work

have ques- khushi to study yeah so she used to wrk as a servant in manor of raizada's? some other job?

did you plan another men entry for khushi too?
 i love this dadi:)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Dear ML, 
U know I am absolutely loving this FF...
Every update beats the former ones...and the childhood memories are just making me all gooey...can't help myself...
Khushi always makes me cry...Arnav's reason for his overall behavior is still a mystery so its hard to understand him...but its apparent that he cares for Khushi a lot...
U know I have been a big fan of Mirage...and in concluding part I commented and asked for another masterpiece from u...well u haven't disappointed me and given me such a beautiful gift of this FF...
Thank u so much for writing such a beautiful story...
Love you...

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Milii Goldie
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Wonderful update!!!! Loved each bit of it...Smile.
That Rannvijay guy is creepy...Angry
 
Again...felt sad for Khushi...she must be longing for a family...someone to call her own...Cry
 
Will be waiting eagerly for the 21st...Hug

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Fantastic update.
Didn't liked the way RK talked to khushi. Loved the possessive Arnav. <3



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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 5:15am | IP Logged
i just read chapter 5

i loved it Big smile...tht ranvijay guys is a creep Angry

but i loved Arnav's hold on KhushiEmbarrassed it was way to possesive nd loving at the same time...tht guy just held her arm...nd this out burst by Arnav amazing ClapClap

my heart goes out to Khushi...i wish she does get a a huge family..the way she wants itSmile...nd Arnav doesn miss out anythin...m really sure...he's gonna giv her everythin she wishes nd deservesHeart!!!!

i do wish Khushi stops callin Arnav nd Anjali as Chotesaab nd Memsaab...i knw u hav a reason for lettin khushi call them tht...but atleast not Arnav...i feel bad every time she calls him Chotesaab...its lik a reminder tht she can't be who she was with him...

their cute room scene was very sweet Smile

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