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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 71)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:27am | IP Logged
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More than anything else, I really loved their childhood flashback. It was beautifully written and I could actually see it happening.

 
RK .. poor Anjali. Why she always ends up with the wrong kind of man? But his purpose in this chapter was wonderfully served! So will be waiting to see more.
 
PS: Now I can't stop wondering who the "only one actor in India" is. LOL

Oh, it's easy. It's NNM. now Figure what those initials stand for. But please don't say eww... once you figure him outLOL I'm warning you in advance.Tongue

National Nutrition Month ?? LOLLOL
another clue ??
Google is very smart .. Wink .. will tell you in a jiffy.

jiffy ??? 
No I think I found it LOLLOL
Not really sure though Confused

I've figured it out ... NNM ... LOL

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:27am | IP Logged
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It was awesum again i love ur updates...:-) :-).

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kishmish

Originally posted by Agathe

Originally posted by Omoraboti

Originally posted by Agathe

Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by Omoraboti

More than anything else, I really loved their childhood flashback. It was beautifully written and I could actually see it happening.

 
RK .. poor Anjali. Why she always ends up with the wrong kind of man? But his purpose in this chapter was wonderfully served! So will be waiting to see more.
 
PS: Now I can't stop wondering who the "only one actor in India" is. LOL

Oh, it's easy. It's NNM. now Figure what those initials stand for. But please don't say eww... once you figure him outLOL I'm warning you in advance.Tongue

National Nutrition Month ?? LOLLOL
another clue ??
Google is very smart .. Wink .. will tell you in a jiffy.

jiffy ??? 
No I think I found it LOLLOL
Not really sure though Confused

I've figured it out ... NNM ... LOL

i too got it...

oops my guess was wrong...

i thgt it was HREmbarrassed

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Agathe

BOOO
Nanav not Fair LOL
Sorry for the late Unresing as I deleted my comment undeliberately CryCry

What an amazing Chapter !!! I just loved it !
I know I say this for each chapter, but you give amazing chapter each time, then what can I do ??

First Part !
I loved the way Arnav was distracted by Khushi's presence LOLLOL
And the FB was really cute ! 
Arnav teaching Khushi how to take care of a plant and Khushi feeding the plant with biscuits ROFLROFL

I start to like Arnav's Dad, he knows his son quite well WinkWink

Second part !!
Anjali is really sweet ! She was so eager to know Arnav's opinion as if he was Karl Lagarfield LOLLOL

For the first time Khushi you showed Khushi behaving casually Wink
and you showed how much Khushi knows Arnav well LOLLOL

I like Anjali's character a lot WinkWink
and I loved the way Arnav teased Anjali LOLLOL

The entire part was just lively Big smileBig smile

Third Part !!!
what an amazing entry RK LOLLOL (for me It's VD LOLLOL)
Seriously this character is just like RK LOLLOL

But for now he did a very bad impression to me AngryAngry
Well what did I expect from an RK ?? LOLLOL

Khushi reaction seeing Anjali and RK's french kiss was just ROFLROFL
She's so innocent !!


Last Part !!!!

My favourite one !!
What I loved the most is the way you described Arnav and especially Khushi's reaction to RK's behaviour WinkWink

RK is just a spoil brat ! AngryDead
Man you're going to get engaged, how can you talk to another woman like that, that too in front of your future BIL DeadDead

Thank God Arnav reacted WinkWink

and what a Reaction ShockedShocked
I didn't expect such outburst ShockedShocked

Amazing !


BTW why Anjali can't choose good life patners ?? Shyaam and here RK ?? Really girl WackoWacko
At least with RK's entry we have someone to curse ROFLROFL and drool over EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


NOTE 

What DaDi is Maggie Smith you mean McGonagall ROFLROFL
Now I'm going to picture that 



LOLLOLLOL

In fact till now Khushi is SI and Arnav has no face LOLLOL




HUHAHALOLLOL

Stalking skill babyEvil Smile
yOUR dADI LOOKING HotLOL



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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
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MY comment is in the reverse order today.

What is wrong with men like Ranvijay? Lusting for any pretty girl they come across and to top that they think that these women are dying to serve them in every way ... disgusting creatures but very true to life Angry. and Anjali sure knows how to choose creeps ... poor judge of character, our Anjali. Poor baby, she needs to get ready for heart break.

Now I'm sure about prediction being correct. YAY!!!!! 

She froze, coz she knows what it means to be harrassed by men like RanvijayCry. Arnav! I'm so proud of you. Whatever may have happened in the past, you stood up for your friend and that is the first step you have taken towards that redemption. 

Everyone in the family seems to expect Arnav and Khushi's friendship the way it was fifteen years ago. This sure shows that they are a classy lot. Loved Arthur for noticing Arnav's emotions. Very rare for a father. Shows how much he loves his son and wants his old Arnav backSmile

and now about Khushi, arnav and Anjali scene ... . Just like old times and that was the awwwLOL moment of the day for me. Arnav is unable to take his off Khushi. Is the observant friend attracted to his childhood friend now? He just needs to see Khushi dressed up ... a red saree perhaps? and our boy will surely lose his mind. 

But these two need to talk before that right ML? 

Loooved it as usual Big smile and my my my are you prompt or what LOL

Was waiting for your comment.Wink
Hush! You are too quick to judge Ranvijay. He is not your typical Shyam.LOL yes, he's all touchy touchy, but let's just say that he is Aadat se majboor. I've characterised him just like how modern men are. Who knows, after some chapters, you might just fall in love with him like Anjali did.Wink

And yes, Arnav and Khushi will talk. Talk and talk and talk until they just get frustrated and pin down each other like bunnies.ROFL

And yes, I love punctuality. When I promise, I deliver it.Tongue

ya ya, I agree that I'm too quick to judge at times and maybe one day I'll think that Ranvijay is not too bad. Wink Rather a flawed human just like the rest of us. But I do know that I would never forgive him for hitting on Khushi ... you know why? A lot of men especially in India and parts of world where you get help at home think that these women are easy prey coz they will not reveal when abused because of their lower class. That is unfair. Ouch

and and and I'm waiting for that day when Arnav and Khushi go at each other like bunnies babe Embarrassed

yup u r rite...

these men think taking lust on maids s easy

as no body will believe them and moreover

they wont raise thr voice againt the cruelity Ouch

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Agathe

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Originally posted by Agathe

Originally posted by molten_lava

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<font color="#cc0000">More than anything else, I really loved their childhood flashback. It was beautifully written and I could actually see it happening.</font>


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<font color="#cc0000">RK .. poor Anjali. Why she always ends up with the wrong kind of man? But his purpose in this chapter was wonderfully served! So will be waiting to see more.</font>


<em>PS: Now I can't stop wondering who the "only one actor in India" is.<font color="#cc0000"> LOL</font>



Oh, it's easy. It's NNM. now Figure what those initials stand for. But please don't say eww... once you figure him outLOLI'm warning you in advance.Tongue



National Nutrition Month ??LOLLOL

another clue ??

</div><font color="#cc0000">Google is very smart .. Wink.. will tell you in a jiffy.</font>

<div>
jiffy ???
No I think I found itLOLLOL
Not really sure thoughConfused
its NIL NITEN MUKESH...i kinda lik this guy!!;)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Absolutly loved it.
Cant believe arnav went crazy just cauz ro flirted a little woth oushi woah he is a one hell of a possesive man especially when it comes to kushi. I hope another man comes into kushis life a bit later on in the story so that arnav can actually feel what jelousy feels like. Wonder how many things will be broken then.
Cant wait till saturday!

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