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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 69)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AquaSandhya

Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by AquaSandhya


MY comment is in the reverse order today.

What is wrong with men like Ranvijay? Lusting for any pretty girl they come across and to top that they think that these women are dying to serve them in every way ... disgusting creatures but very true to life Angry. and Anjali sure knows how to choose creeps ... poor judge of character, our Anjali. Poor baby, she needs to get ready for heart break.

Now I'm sure about prediction being correct. YAY!!!!! 

She froze, coz she knows what it means to be harrassed by men like RanvijayCry. Arnav! I'm so proud of you. Whatever may have happened in the past, you stood up for your friend and that is the first step you have taken towards that redemption. 

Everyone in the family seems to expect Arnav and Khushi's friendship the way it was fifteen years ago. This sure shows that they are a classy lot. Loved Arthur for noticing Arnav's emotions. Very rare for a father. Shows how much he loves his son and wants his old Arnav backSmile

and now about Khushi, arnav and Anjali scene ... . Just like old times and that was the awwwLOL moment of the day for me. Arnav is unable to take his off Khushi. Is the observant friend attracted to his childhood friend now? He just needs to see Khushi dressed up ... a red saree perhaps? and our boy will surely lose his mind. 

But these two need to talk before that right ML? 

Loooved it as usual Big smile and my my my are you prompt or what LOL

Was waiting for your comment.Wink
Hush! You are too quick to judge Ranvijay. He is not your typical Shyam.LOL yes, he's all touchy touchy, but let's just say that he is Aadat se majboor. I've characterised him just like how modern men are. Who knows, after some chapters, you might just fall in love with him like Anjali did.Wink

And yes, Arnav and Khushi will talk. Talk and talk and talk until they just get frustrated and pin down each other like bunnies.ROFL

And yes, I love punctuality. When I promise, I deliver it.Tongue

ya ya, I agree that I'm too quick to judge at times and maybe one day I'll think that Ranvijay is not too bad. Wink Rather a flawed human just like the rest of us. But I do know that I would never forgive him for hitting on Khushi ... you know why? A lot of men especially in India and parts of world where you get help at home think that these women are easy prey coz they will not reveal when abused because of their lower class. That is unfair. Ouch

and and and I'm waiting for that day when Arnav and Khushi go at each other like bunnies babe Embarrassed
@bold: You will be dealing with the exact same thing. try fitting the pieces of the puzzle. That will explain Khushi's behaviour in the present.

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Am glad you decided to come back and write this new story. Though I don't frequently comment, I used to religiously stalk "Mirage" and now this one. 

I have to say the concept is beautiful and characters of Arnav-Khushi are very intriguing Wink but am still waiting to see more layers of each one of them and of course know what happened 15 years back that changed Arnav... 


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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by AquaSandhya

Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by AquaSandhya


MY comment is in the reverse order today.

What is wrong with men like Ranvijay? Lusting for any pretty girl they come across and to top that they think that these women are dying to serve them in every way ... disgusting creatures but very true to life Angry. and Anjali sure knows how to choose creeps ... poor judge of character, our Anjali. Poor baby, she needs to get ready for heart break.

Now I'm sure about prediction being correct. YAY!!!!! 

She froze, coz she knows what it means to be harrassed by men like RanvijayCry. Arnav! I'm so proud of you. Whatever may have happened in the past, you stood up for your friend and that is the first step you have taken towards that redemption. 

Everyone in the family seems to expect Arnav and Khushi's friendship the way it was fifteen years ago. This sure shows that they are a classy lot. Loved Arthur for noticing Arnav's emotions. Very rare for a father. Shows how much he loves his son and wants his old Arnav backSmile

and now about Khushi, arnav and Anjali scene ... . Just like old times and that was the awwwLOL moment of the day for me. Arnav is unable to take his off Khushi. Is the observant friend attracted to his childhood friend now? He just needs to see Khushi dressed up ... a red saree perhaps? and our boy will surely lose his mind. 

But these two need to talk before that right ML? 

Loooved it as usual Big smile and my my my are you prompt or what LOL

Was waiting for your comment.Wink
Hush! You are too quick to judge Ranvijay. He is not your typical Shyam.LOL yes, he's all touchy touchy, but let's just say that he is Aadat se majboor. I've characterised him just like how modern men are. Who knows, after some chapters, you might just fall in love with him like Anjali did.Wink

And yes, Arnav and Khushi will talk. Talk and talk and talk until they just get frustrated and pin down each other like bunnies.ROFL

And yes, I love punctuality. When I promise, I deliver it.Tongue

ya ya, I agree that I'm too quick to judge at times and maybe one day I'll think that Ranvijay is not too bad. Wink Rather a flawed human just like the rest of us. But I do know that I would never forgive him for hitting on Khushi ... you know why? A lot of men especially in India and parts of world where you get help at home think that these women are easy prey coz they will not reveal when abused because of their lower class. That is unfair. Ouch

and and and I'm waiting for that day when Arnav and Khushi go at each other like bunnies babe Embarrassed
@bold: You will be dealing with the exact same thing. try fitting the pieces of the puzzle. That will explain Khushi's behaviour in the present.

Had guessed it and my heart aches for Khushi and Arnav who had to witness it Cry Will count the hours to 21st now ...

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by Omoraboti

More than anything else, I really loved their childhood flashback. It was beautifully written and I could actually see it happening.

 
RK .. poor Anjali. Why she always ends up with the wrong kind of man? But his purpose in this chapter was wonderfully served! So will be waiting to see more.
 
PS: Now I can't stop wondering who the "only one actor in India" is. LOL

Oh, it's easy. It's NNM. now Figure what those initials stand for. But please don't say eww... once you figure him outLOL I'm warning you in advance.Tongue
 
Figured! LOL
 
And not going ewww LOL .. I kind of like him. LOL .. more in bad guy role .. With stubble and all. Wink
 
Thanks for the hint!

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:37am | IP Logged
SOOO Cuteee Flashback :) Hmmm, Something Terrible Happened With Khushi & Arnav Could Not Help Her At That Moment Naa? Ranvijay Is So Strange . Poor Khushi :( She Is So Innocent & Damn Cute Embarrassed

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:50am | IP Logged
I cannot get enough of this ff ...figured out what might have happened earlier ..but why did Arnav run away? For me Arnav and Kushi r always BS And SI :)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
I have unresed 
Sorry for the delay, it's because I clicked on clear form instead of post reply OuchOuch
I'm so stupid LOL

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