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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 67)

cherryteacake Groupbie

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Great update Clap...don't like this RV character but he managed to bring out Arnav's defensiveness over Khushi Smile. I like how you've got Arnav very observant over Khushi too and the memories (so far) are very cute. Looking forward to Sunday xx

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Nichuss IF-Addictz

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:39am | IP Logged

lovely starting with a shocking ending... Shocked

a morning business convo between father and son

arnie eyes caught khushi doing gardening,,

which led him to remind a small incident in thr 

childhood... Smile

the innocent reply of khushi ...i gave biscuit water to

plant but it dies... Embarrassed (so innocentwa,,,,)

arnie father noticied arnie lukng (admiring) khushi...

now anji dressing like bride

and asking opinion was too beautiful.part

every sis-bro experience this moment...

teasing and finally gvng ego n saying u luk beautiful sis Embarrassed

khushi enjoy seein the bro-sis relation

im  confused,,,arnie want to stay

away from KHUSHI...but he always admiringly lukng @ khushi

and even notifying each n every small thing she s doing Tongue

RANVIJAY fiancee of arnie got the impression..

me too extending the comment for his judgement...

the convo with arnie in bar  and how he try

to misbehave with khushi...

showing lust on her...

he s not going to be gud for anji...

anji please rethink ur decision..

i dnt feel Rk is goin to be positive and is exiting soon


do u imagine hrithik to be arnie...just to knw...

anyways for me its barun only...


Edited by Nichuss - 18 April 2013 at 3:25am

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..mrinalini.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Nope..Me don't like da RKBroken HeartLOL

Arnav is your dark,intense,brooding man.I like his cocktail  of possessiveness and protectiveness.He is confused with his own feelings but he'd come to terms with them with time.

And I like Khushi.No,I LOVE her.The yearning to be close to Arnav,to belong's so haunting and yet so poignant!!Embarrassed

RK is an idiot.He's a typical spoilt brat from the looks of it and he's basically calling for trouble with Arnav!!He has got some nerves!!Not that I am appreciative of it!!Sleepy

Amazing update.The story has a subtle elegance,an old world charm related to Mussorie and an innocence that makes it stand out in the crowd!!

Now waiting for sundayyyHug

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smilesilently Newbie

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:48am | IP Logged
it was amazing...

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Omoraboti IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged

More than anything else, I really loved their childhood flashback. It was beautifully written and I could actually see it happening.

RK .. poor Anjali. Why she always ends up with the wrong kind of man? But his purpose in this chapter was wonderfully served! So will be waiting to see more.
PS: Now I can't stop wondering who the "only one actor in India" is. LOL

Edited by Omoraboti - 18 April 2013 at 2:14am

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AquaSandhya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:01am | IP Logged

MY comment is in the reverse order today.

What is wrong with men like Ranvijay? Lusting for any pretty girl they come across and to top that they think that these women are dying to serve them in every way ... disgusting creatures but very true to life Angry. and Anjali sure knows how to choose creeps ... poor judge of character, our Anjali. Poor baby, she needs to get ready for heart break.

Now I'm sure about prediction being correct. YAY!!!!! 

She froze, coz she knows what it means to be harrassed by men like RanvijayCry. Arnav! I'm so proud of you. Whatever may have happened in the past, you stood up for your friend and that is the first step you have taken towards that redemption. 

Everyone in the family seems to expect Arnav and Khushi's friendship the way it was fifteen years ago. This sure shows that they are a classy lot. Loved Arthur for noticing Arnav's emotions. Very rare for a father. Shows how much he loves his son and wants his old Arnav backSmile

and now about Khushi, arnav and Anjali scene ... . Just like old times and that was the awwwLOL moment of the day for me. Arnav is unable to take his off Khushi. Is the observant friend attracted to his childhood friend now? He just needs to see Khushi dressed up ... a red saree perhaps? and our boy will surely lose his mind. 

But these two need to talk before that right ML? 

Loooved it as usual Big smile and my my my are you prompt or what LOL

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truptscool Senior Member

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:02am | IP Logged

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clarissajohn IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:04am | IP Logged

Hey lavos


Sparks flying for arnav and khushi's dumbfounded with his behavior


Im loving it


Poor anji why always get ganji man


Loved his name though


Is that actor is hrithik roshan ' but he is not British right


But I would love to imagine them as BS and SI of course


So waiting for Sunday


Tujse naraz nahi zindagi heran hum mein


Tere masoom sawalon se parashan hu mein


Dedicated  to small khushi and arnav


That red ginger lilly part was cute Big smile

edited again
NNM eeewww


No no  not that I don't hate him actually he was so hot in 3GWink


But BS will be fine we can make him british LOL

Edited by clarissajohn - 18 April 2013 at 2:36am

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