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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 66)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged
BOOO
Nanav not Fair LOL
Sorry for the late Unresing as I deleted my comment undeliberately CryCry

What an amazing Chapter !!! I just loved it !
I know I say this for each chapter, but you give amazing chapter each time, then what can I do ??

First Part !
I loved the way Arnav was distracted by Khushi's presence LOLLOL
And the FB was really cute ! 
Arnav teaching Khushi how to take care of a plant and Khushi feeding the plant with biscuits ROFLROFL

I start to like Arnav's Dad, he knows his son quite well WinkWink

Second part !!
Anjali is really sweet ! She was so eager to know Arnav's opinion as if he was Karl Lagarfield LOLLOL

For the first time Khushi you showed Khushi behaving casually Wink
and you showed how much Khushi knows Arnav well LOLLOL

I like Anjali's character a lot WinkWink
and I loved the way Arnav teased Anjali LOLLOL

The entire part was just lively Big smileBig smile

Third Part !!!
what an amazing entry RK LOLLOL (for me It's VD LOLLOL)
Seriously this character is just like RK LOLLOL

But for now he did a very bad impression to me AngryAngry
Well what did I expect from an RK ?? LOLLOL

Khushi reaction seeing Anjali and RK's french kiss was just ROFLROFL
She's so innocent !!


Last Part !!!!

My favourite one !!
What I loved the most is the way you described Arnav and especially Khushi's reaction to RK's behaviour WinkWink

RK is just a spoil brat ! AngryDead
Man you're going to get engaged, how can you talk to another woman like that, that too in front of your future BIL DeadDead

Thank God Arnav reacted WinkWink

and what a Reaction ShockedShocked
I didn't expect such outburst ShockedShocked

Amazing !


BTW why Anjali can't choose good life patners ?? Shyaam and here RK ?? Really girl WackoWacko
At least with RK's entry we have someone to curse ROFLROFL and drool over EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


NOTE 

What DaDi is Maggie Smith you mean McGonagall ROFLROFL
Now I'm going to picture that 



LOLLOLLOL

In fact till now Khushi is SI and Arnav has no face LOLLOL






Edited by Agathe - 18 April 2013 at 2:49am

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I liked it...

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nice one

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Arnav's character is intense...
In the first parts of the update, it looked like he was loosening himself around Khushi a bit... but after the RK incident, I guess he'll put as distance as possible between them. But still observing and safe gaurding her from distance of course...
RK has some guts to speak about fidelity in such a way in front of his fiance's brother.

I am waiting for La's entry.. 

I like the pace of your story. Its pleasant.

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:33am | IP Logged
nice update.gave an insight about their likely past.wanna see arnav reaction to this nd waiting for la to come

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nice update...so arnav seems to enjoy khushis presence now but i guess the incident with RK might again bring a separation for the two...
hmm RK points to ponder on his characterization...
loved the update...and loved choti khuhsis way of gardening...these two are adorable...
loved the update...she has an empty look on her face with the whole situation thats kinda really bad...

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Read the last two chapters. I like the pace of the story. It is slow but not boring. Infact I love it. The best part of the updates is the sweet innocent moments between Arnav and Khushi as toddlers. They are so sweet and fresh. 

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