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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 60)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Loved the chapter...flashback part was so beautifully written...
cute nicknames Annyav and Kukku...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Awesome part...
 
Fb's of Annyav and Kukku are adorable...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
that was brilliant to read
seems like dadi likes khushi for arnav?=]
i love arnav and dadi relationship
and poor khushi, feel sorry that she lost her bestie and for her financial state=//

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Amazing update Clap...loved it Big smile

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Wonderfulll...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:46pm | IP Logged

Wow, that was simply beautiful. Arnav's dadi is amazing...she's so cool and modern. Since you emphasized that she can go out of her way to do things for her loved ones and Arnav just happenes to be her favorite...my guess is that she'll be the first one to support Arnav and Khushi.

Arnav and Khushi's childhood memories were beautifully written...I was so touched while reading them that I had tears in my eyes. Khushi feels this awkwardness or Arnav's refusal to acknowledge their friendship has to do with their social status but little does she know that Arnav behavior has to do with whatever happened in the past. That makes me wonder; doesn't Khushi remember that childhood incident at all? Or she has somehow blocked that incident from her mind?

I have read Mirage and have become your fan since then and I am already hooked to this story. I am in no hurry to find out what the mystery, so take your time and tell the story the way you want to. 



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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
Awesome update.waiting for Thursday.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:53pm | IP Logged
Awesome and brilliant update, beautifully written. Wow I'm loving Dadi, she even told Arnav that khushi would be of great benefit to him. Loved the best friend concern Arnav showed Khushi when she had to carry the bags home, I got the feeling Khushi went to the market that early because she would watch the sun rising as well. Awww the flash backs were so sweet and cute when Arnav took Khushi along with him to watch the sunrise and him changing his bedroom so Khushi could call him and he would be able to hear. Awww the last part was sad Khushi breaking down as it had got too much for her and also remembering the 15 years without Arnav. I'm not a great fan of romantic story's on Arnav and Khushi so your Storyline is perfect for me. Please continue soon xx

P.S. Can you please send me the link to Mirage or if you have got a index, would love to read your other stories. 


Edited by P4rveen12 - 15 April 2013 at 3:54pm

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